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Her Fragile Soul Deminished
Detached And Out Of Place
Its Like An Angels Cry
When Death Shall Seek Embarce

Thw words shatter her soul,
Fragile as glass,
The girl wasn't strong enough,
to fight the demons, and to last

they smiled as they destroyed her,
and riped her limb from limb,
drinking the blood from her wounds,
in extasy their mind swims.

OMG That's so morbid! HAPPY PEOPLE!! :)

Wow That Was Deep! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

the blood surrounding them,
and their shallow guilt,
slowly she,
begins to wilt

slipping deeper and deeper,
they watch her bid farewell,
noone knows of her excitance(sp?) now,
not like theyre gonna tell.

next one happy :)

But what the hell.
Things don't matter now
and she knows just what to do
there's money in her pocket

but nothing in the world to buy,
she doesnt need food or clothes
she just needs to die.

Wow Gemma Added a Twist! Way To Go xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

she want her life to end
no more pain
no more heartbreak
no more tears
she wants it to end

and so she cuts her throat..

Why make it so hard?

Though it's only a minor cut
but a cut is a cut and
the next thing she does is
join Poetry and Quotes

and the last poems she writes,
give's everyone a startling shock,
it's one about,
her brother and his sock?

omg guyz you're sOoOoO talented
excellent
peaceee

she writes in some fourms,
happy she starts to feel,
no more cuts does she make,
and the old ones begin to heal...

But then the gladness
from her heart turns
to madness, when she clicks
0n a forum called
'depression and sadness'.

she explains all her feelings,
and why she dosnt want to live,
but another fight starts,
and no advice do they(other people) give.

she loves the thought of punishing them,
they deserve to watch her die.
this is all there doing,
but they do not know why.

she gathers them all together.
what a party it will be!
They stand round for their suprise,
but she lets go, and is free.

The trigger she pulls back
And everyone starts to scream
Happy at last
Because she gave them a blast

she was laid to rest
amongst the best.
she was strong, she was brave,
she chose to go to her grave.

lol Wow This Add-a-Line Was Funny Sad And Depressed Me Right To Laughter :) Thanx xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

this was a good idea and it turned out to be pretty good

start another one?

they wanted him to be perfect,
"the angel that walked the earth".
so they cliped the angels wings
to hold him on puppet strings.

When The Mask Starts To Fade
Pain Will Rape His Mind
His Suggar Coated Lies
Will Drip Away Devine

But if they not feel sorry
Nor they feel no guilt
Then may death befall early
Make their inner souls wilt

he was drowning deeper
in his dark cold life
if no one understood him
he'd settle with a knife

he's waiting for someone
someone who's kind
someone to listen
whose not stubborn and blind

his knees buckled before him then
his eyes rolled to the back
a knife was no longer needed
his world was colored black

(woah dude!! lol.. i was thinkin of him.. ya know.. goin to a good place.. lol.. morbid, man!! lol- but so cool!)

but just as satan begins to laugh
thinking he has won
this young man just breaks free
indeed he is the one

the battle he fought
had finally gone and died
the rest of his life was happy
he lived his life with pride

(ok.. sorry.. i didn't know how to end it!)

Start a new one?

yea!!! good idea.... i'll just start.. umm.. ok

She looked straight down into the sea
She had to jump on number three
No one looked plus no one cared
of all the pain she hadn't shared

Dripping Away With Pain
After Being Thrust In Cutters Ocean
Weakened She Lay
Like Suicidal Potion