I need help!

I don't know if this is the right place to ask but could you please tell me what you think of my new poem "Endless Love" is it vell done poetically?

Please.. I really need some help so please comment/vote.. I will return the favour twice, I promise! Hugs to all of you

well now you have five... do you ever look at anyone elses?

??? Yes always look at anyone elses... ????
Sorry but I don't understand what you mean...
I've already checked out two of your poems today cause yesterday evening I wasn't online..

hugs

what i mean is if you comment on other peoples poems you have more of a chance at getting checked out, at least by my figures. I just click on randome poems and read the ones that apple to me, i crtique them, and tell why or why not i like them (does that make any sence to you?) I want people to destroy my poems tell why the suck, what they hate about them, but also tell me the best points what i do well, very few people do that. You cant get any better with out comments and some destroing....? Basicly you comment on others they are couious about you... kk?

~Breeze

? i dont get what ur sayin