Looking for Comments and Ratings

'Ello everyone. The name is Jake and I just joined this site. My reason for being here is to improve as a poet and I was curious if there was anyway I could pull in some traffic towards my stuff. So, this is my first attempt at that and hopefully I'll get some people to comment.

A little bit about my work~ it's fairly dark and usualy desperate and it tends to deal with SI a bit. Some of my works are a tad morbid but I haven't had the chance to upload them yet.

Anyways, i'm hoping to get some comments and heck, I'll even comment in return. ^_^

Jake(Fabbon)~

I have read and commented on some of your poems. I would like to read more of your work. You have a unique style, and form. I love most of the ones I've read. and yes they are dark. but you potray your emtions so well. I enjoyed reading them, and hope that you will read mine. Be honest with my work, as i gave you my honest opion on yours.
now my question is have you ever read any cummings?

~Breeze (blackrose)

wrong forum...

Thank you for the previous statement and comments ^_^.
But about Cummings, yes I have have read some of Cummings' work. Some intrigues me but most of it angers me and confuses me. I honestly belive that Cummings was out for money with most of his poems. I can honetsly see him sitting down in his chair wondering how he can mangle a six word sentence in order to make pseudo-intelectuals lament and ponder the meaning of life. It's all just a ploy for fame and fortune.

Oops, my apologies. you are right.
Forgive me, for I overlooked the correct forum.
I guess there is nothing do now but wait for a Forum Mod to move the post to the correct place.

i know! instead of bitching about the placement of the post just answer the damn thing. is it that hard?

Welcome to the site, Jake, i'll be happy to check out your stuff.

Peaces.

no harm done, just remember it till next time..

peace