Poetry Challenge: Unknown

1. Line : 2 syllables
2. Line : 5
3. Line : 4
4. Line : 3

Impress me...:)

Alright. Here's the link:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=424704

Not very impressive but the challenge sounded fun. :P

Peaces.

Life is
Not what it once was.
Skies have darkened.
Grieving loss.

Darkness
takes my trembling hand.
Night forever.
Death at hand.

Blue skies,
Surround the blue sea,
Like a small, lost,
Memory

-Lyd

ooooh i like Lydia's!

Peaces.

1. Line : 2 syllables
2. Line : 5
3. Line : 4
4. Line : 3

Held back,
I feel restricted,
by this set rule...
I am trapped.

hmm...a poem about how it is somewhat difficult to write with-in the set frame...

1. Line : 2 syllables
2. Line : 5
3. Line : 4
4. Line : 3

Afraid
Like that homeless man
I'm so depressed
And alone

empty
blackness all around
tormenting me
till i die

Flower,
Beautiful and blue,
Dear to my heart,
Just like you

Mirror
A painted picture,
Fakes who I am,
A scared man

There kinda stupid but I was rushed so sorry if they suck...

Not to be rude or anything, but as you wrote yourself, the structure is to be as follows:
1. Line : 2 syllables
2. Line : 5
3. Line : 4
4. Line : 3

Your poem, though, follows this structure...:

1.Line : 1 syllable
2. line : 6
3 line : 5
4 line : 5

Water
Holds my reflection
And always makes
Me feel calm.

lol i did my best :-D

Lovely
As she walks on by
Such flawless grace
So lovely

Striking
As he walks on by
A perfect form
So striking

Ugly
As they walk on by
Shunned by the world
So ugly

Spectacular bob! That was truly beautiful:)

Friendship
Is a two way street
To give and take
Hold it close

Steve

Careing,
Slowly tearing me,
Crying tonight,
Stop this fight.

Kaplow?:p

Mike,

Like both of them, good work.

Steve

1. Line : 2 syllables
2. Line : 5
3. Line : 4
4. Line : 3

Broken
Torn into pieces
Will i repair?
Life ceases

mark

Ok...I'll try...

Death came
On a stormy night
With skies so black
My life fades

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True love
Not reality
It got me now
Hell I see

Ok...first try...not good...I'll be thinking and I'll be posting more later..... :)

unknown
consequences are
like wretched lies
in our lives

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
that suxx