can I borrow a poem?

I have tried and tried again to write about true love, but seeing as how I am not IN love, I find it hard to write about it...does anyone have a poem about undying love that I can read?

something on the lines of "you are my life,I can not live without your presence"....something like that...

umm u can check out some of mine, im sure they could help

hmmm i have one called the two sunrises.

No offence, but if you're not in love, don't write about it. If you try to force a poem to hold a feeling that you don't feel at the moment it will most likly not turn out to good.

Hope you find/found one though:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

Yeah.. I tried writing a lvoe poem but I couldn't fake an emotion I haven't felt.. LoL, I got two lines off, w00t. But whatever, I was able to put those into a "breakup" poem, because I know the pain of loosing someone. But about that, I could writei something for you if I ever found inspiration. Then again, poem with inspiration on demand aren't usually as good.. >_>

I used my poem for my girlfriend... she gave me a big kiss after. It's called "20 Reasons Why I Love You"

Take a look at some of my work. The love poems I do write are more on the depressing side, but I think the best one is the one Matt Hall and I wrote together [to eachother] on "The Poem Game" forum. It's called "Feelings Fade"

-- Maharani of Angels

Read some of Wilting Flower, Monkey Dude and DarkTinkerbell - thats me

I have a few....

My Angel
our love
If I knew

and a few more...check them out =0)