how does everyone write wonderful love poems here?

i try and try and try to weite love poems but i just cant....i signed up on dis site yesterday but ive been writing poems for ages...i cant write love ones... can u plz look at my poem 'three words' and tell me what i need to improve on?

please sum1

I'll read your poem in a sec, but the only thing I can say is that the best way for poetry to sound good, is that it has to come from your heart and soul. Its hard I know I have to make me write a poem, but once I start it and I put my heart and soul into it, it sounds good, but if i do not put all I have into my poetry they aren't as good.

thanx:) that helps ALOT:) i try to put heart and soul into it but when i read others i just think omg how do they write lyk that

Ha! Mike I completely agree, nice one.
This isn't the section to request for us to READ one of your poems, do so in the correct forum.

but i am asking a question like how to improve writing love poems...

o isee i thouigh cause it kinda had to do wit writing techniques that it goes here my bad half of it does and half doesnt lmaoz...sorrie

Don't be bound by "rules" of poetry...Don't let rhytm and rhyme consume your works, try instead to write how you feel and avoid using clichès.

Poetry, as cliche as it may sound - Is from the heart, use that love and put in words, and think thats what you're doing.

Ignore the fact it's words, and just put emotion on paper.

I think it was a nice poem, and if you keep writing I'm sure you'll improve.

Love poems are generally crap, the exceptions being any by Lord Byron. He was the balls.

Good luck with writing. I'll go easy on "Three Words" with the slight criticism, you could improve with practice. Read more. Experience everything. Don't worry, I wrote crap when I was your age too, and have only been able to change this on the rare occasion.

Okay, and you get this for free:
Try branching out of the one AB style, and try some others, it'll make your rhymes stronger.

believe it or not, its easier to know wha tlove is after it is gone. Until you are truly in love, writing love poems will always feel awkward. As for me, Love poems come very easily for me only because i know exactly how it feels and all i have to do is add a rhythm to it

I have one word for you "study". You have to study the craft, study how to write and write well, and study the great love poems/poets that came before you. Here is your first lesson;

Greatest Love Poems:
http://www.blurty.com/talkpost.bml?journal=rglove&itemid=3435

A collection I put together of some of the all time great love/romantic poetry.

i will look at it :)

i cant find it you need to put it on your featured poems kk xxxxx

Girl you dont have any poem posted there!!!

if you wanna write a wonderful love poem, then just write it about what your feeling , nd the best ones are the ones that come from the heart.

take care .

-sam

hi lol