Help???

I just beame a member a couple o days ago and i'd really appreciate it if any1 could help me in my poems by reading it, commenting, and hopfully give me some advice. Thanx ^.^;;

Aken Sol

P.S. Some of them are about lost love that really hurt me... and to be honest, i havn't completely healed. So i tought it'd fit in here some how

Yea don't wrry about it. i'll jst go check urs out now. Luv rose

No problem, I'll check out your poems now.