one of the best formatted poem I've ever read

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    agreed, with a format like that it seems really easy to slip into repetition, but the poem remains fresh throughout.

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    i agree i read it and i really liked it. makes me feel peaceful after reading it.

  • Mj
    19 years ago

    yeah. it is a very well written poem.

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Bob, I am flattered by your comments.

    Regards,

    Steve