Poetry Challenge part 6: Tetractys

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    BallNMatt
    I hope you are reading this, you moron
    You
    Incompetent
    "Poet"

    Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

    //Ari\\

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Oh, but there's more i want to say to you
    But here isn't
    A good place
    For such
    Words...

    Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    Strings
    hold me.
    A puppet.
    Dead to this world,
    yet alive to so many shallow minds.

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    Remarkable
    is your
    ability
    to
    find such amusement in such simple things.

    I...
    I think
    I envy you.
    Nonetheless,
    I fear I never shall become like you.

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    Smile?
    I am sorry
    dear Sunny.
    Sadly,
    I have forgotten how it feels to smile

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    But the touch of thy skin brings warmth to me.
    Nevertheless
    My soul still
    remains
    cold

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    You, Enslavement of Forgotten Beauty
    If one [of] us
    Tried to make you
    Laugh..
    Would you?

    Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    What help may they offer to such as me?
    Dear Sunny.
    I am
    a very strange
    man.

    None have ever
    known me.
    They may think
    so
    but I know within me that no one has

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    I try,
    but the dark
    is way to dense.
    Light
    is something that escapes my trembling eyes.

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    I'm eating
    Raw cookie dough
    This won't suit well with my fragile tummy
    Holy
    COW

    Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    though my name my suggest so, JustAri,
    much beauty
    is seldom seen
    within me.

    Yet if thou tried to make me laugh of joy,
    and joy alone,
    I would
    certainly
    try

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Your heart is
    As good
    As gold even
    When
    Drilled into by shadows of mind and doubt

    I wish
    That self-doubt
    Wasn't plaguing
    You
    As it is now, but one day, it shall pass on

    Leaving
    The dent in
    Your brain that it
    Was once there, but will make you malfunction
    ONCE.

    Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    I do not wish to see pain in others,
    infact
    it breaks me
    and all I am
    fades.

    I find bliss in the art of drawing smiles
    upon the
    faces
    of those I love,
    dear.

    and thus I conclude that my heart is good,
    but the pain
    I see
    in others, break
    me

    Which is the very reason why darkness
    dwells,
    and always will
    dwell inside
    me

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    All I shall see
    is beauty
    Of mind and soul, don't underestimate
    What I
    See :)

    Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    To utter the word "love", now, as I am,
    is a lie
    that even I
    will not
    tell

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Poets here
    Communicating through Tetractys form
    We are
    All
    Very awesome :D

    Aug. 21, 2005

    //Ari\\

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Oooh
    Goody
    Who shall be the
    First to spray
    Mr. Gremlin Bob Sir Shank Furriness?

    Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

    Lmao!

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    Silently, I close my eyes, now, tonight,
    and let my mind
    stray to her
    that I
    love.

    and then, like one who wakes from a dark dream
    to a red dawn,
    I smile.
    She
    is my dawn

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    How beautiful
    And
    Poetic
    I find
    All of this...and morons kick so much ass (lmao)

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    Sometimes,
    Bob,
    I feel as if I love is not in my life
    yet not often,
    just sometimes

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    Darkness
    is present
    now
    for it is night
    in this cold land, and I need to sleep now

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Fry me
    For that was
    Clearly uncalled
    For
    I change my mind...bake me, i dislike grease O.O

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    So
    I say
    goodnight, dear friends
    you are more
    to me than you will ever realize

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    You yourself
    Are truly kewl
    Enslavement of Beauty, don't forget it
    Goodbye
    Nite

    //Ari\\

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    In that case, Bob, to make him a gremlin
    I shall fetch a
    Pail, just to
    Make sure
    *SPLASH*

    *No sense, but please leave it be...lmao.

    //Ari\\

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    I may be a strange man but, a gremlin
    I won't be
    for thee, dear Bob,
    to see.
    nite

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    You might
    Be correct
    Sunny, observe the fleabags popping out
    Of his back, it's
    WEIRD!!!!!

    LMAO

    //Ari\\

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Hell
    We toast
    All will roast
    Luci the cook
    We will all be gremlins and cheese on toast!

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    HAHA!!
    You made me laugh!
    That cheese sounds
    Good
    But only when snug between bread slices

    (and toasted! :D Grilled cheese sandwich lol...)

    //Ari\\

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Steven!
    How are you?
    Wonderful poems you've posted lately here!
    Wow...
    Very awesome! :D (Lol!)

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Sunny sunshine
    Would you like
    Some
    Aloe vera for your very sore tush?
    I got some here. ^__^

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Roast
    Butt burns
    Hot tushie
    Nice Barbecue
    Now pass me the salad and the dressing :)

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Hi Ari & Sunny,

    Good evening from early morning over here in Hong Kong. Just popped in to say hello and thanks for the comments. Have to go, work is calling. Have a nice day and don't feed Bob after mid-night, you know what happens to gremlins!!!

    Cheerio!

    Steve

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    I'm laughing my buttocks off at Steven's message
    Sunny, we must take
    Note that Bob
    Can't eat
    Rice...

    O.O LOL

    //Ari\\

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    Good-bye, Steven
    Take care
    Remember to keep
    Your underwear out of the fault in butt
    So you're
    Kewllll....

    LMAO

    //Ari\\

  • †JustAri†
    19 years ago

    I
    The procastinating (sp?) child of 8th grade
    Must do homework
    That's due
    Tomorrow

    I must also
    Have time to
    Sleep...
    So Nite, everyone! I shall return next
    Day here...

    And...
    I hope to God
    That none of you will feed Bob after twelve
    For i want
    To live

    //Ari\\

  • Amanda Bee
    19 years ago

    WOW! I am glad everyone enjoyed this challenge so much! So many creative minds on one screen. Sunny, JustAri, bob, and enslavement your tetractys were hilarious:)

    By the way bob shank ROCKS!

  • Amanda Bee
    19 years ago

    Be
    Sure to
    Leave the rent
    On the bureau
    As you make your way out of my life. Thanks.

  • Amanda Bee
    19 years ago

    *To go along with the gremlin theme:*

    To
    repel
    a gremlin
    bright light, bright light
    is definitely the best way to go

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Bob
    Gremlin
    Bobbin Shank
    Do not feed him
    He will surely become very cranky