Poetry Challenge..........Ethree

"Time
Falls slow
Without her
At home tonight
In her bed wishing
She wasn't alive
Instead of having her gone
For these past months have been too damn long
When grief's still clutching my arm tightly
While she sleeps six feet under in her grave

Ariana July 31, 2005"

Not my best, but i had been looking up the different forms of poetry and i came upon this one...i already had it written, so there you go. ^_^

//Ari\\

Withers dancing love [working on it]

Eyes,
mirrors
reflecting
embracing thoughts,
surround me, touching
my soul, and body in
flowing seduction entrance
insect, in flower, loving hands
gazing, into eyes which burn in love
My hand, in yours, we spiral, spiral down.

Slowly, into lovers path together one.
This insect, of non deserving nectar
feasts into the flower of angels,
joining and smothering love.
Insect and angel, as one.
With mirrors dancing calm
reflecting beauty,
as loves eyes
become
one.

Once again, I write in a rather...none-sober state...of...mind, body, soul..whatever...

Let's call it...

f*ck it...can anyone give me a title?

I
have felt
such as thou
only dream of.
Within me dwells much
that one for all too long
have thought to be dead, buried
beneath the black dunes of our time,
yet within a few simple souls,
such as me, this genuine secret
this truth, have been kept, until its time come.

Be that now, or never, I cannot tell,
for such power do I not possess,
to tell it when I desire.
No, I will wait, as I have,
since my quest dawned on me,
until when, and if,
I sense it`s time.
I go where
my heart
goes.

yay...I named it "The Second alcolhol-affected rubbish of Enslavement of Beauty"

Puddle of Tears (Double Ethree)

So
Here I
Lie in my
Puddle of tears
Wishing you were here
To wipe away these fears
With my head upon your lap
With your hand stroking me on my back
With things back to the way they used to be

When you’d comfort me in your arms and say
Not to fret ‘cause things would be okay
How’d you always know that they would?
As you’d kiss me on my head
Each time there to save me
From sinking in sobs
But without you
Mom, surely
I will
Drown

Thanks guys. That means so much coming from you two!