Poetry Challege part 6: Teractys part 2

And my luster
May dull
But my value shall rise, for i'm precious
Stone
Once i age...

//Ari\\

You may sculpt me
With your
Scalpel, but
I assure you, this jewel's always the same
Shape

Internally, anyways, you may think
You've shaped me
And you're
Right
You've changed me some...

//Ari\\

Only
To the point
When i believe
That the past is mine, and always shall be
So

It will
Never change
Not even for
A precious, glittery stone such as i
Right?

//Ari\\

O___O

I am
So proud of
What i've just typed
I think i'll submit it to share with the
Site! :D :D

*That was art in the making people...lol.

//Ari\\

Alright
I'll admit
It's not THAT good
But...
It's nice to feel proud of myself today. :)

//Ari\\

I
Love to
Critique poems
On Poems and Quotes
See if i get a "F" you or thank you

//Ari\\

Bleah
Sometimes
I wonder
If i am the
Critic or if i'm just the basher here...

//Ari\\

Cat, i love you to death, even though you
Puked on my
Favorite pair of
Jordache blue
Jeans

//Ari\\

Would
Sunny
Like to borrow
The family
Puke bucket? It's yellow, but it works, yeah?

ha ha ha ah aha

Thanks for the
Tissue, Sunny
I used
It
Wisely by wiping up my dried puke jeans

*ewwwww lmao*

//Ari\\

Blah!
Hum Bug
Fiddle dee
Gremlins at Work
Making me so nervous and panicky

Word
Has it
Ass wipes R us
The new, in thread
Created, directed by JPM

I'm
Going
Back to Hell
I mean, SCHOOL!! But
What's the difference besides that school's so hot???

*Ugh...i don't like that one lol...

*I shall return in the afternoon!

//Ari\\

I
Returned
Yesterday's noon,
But forgot to
Come back here to save this thread sinking!

//Ari\\

Sunny, that was awesome! :D

//Ari\\

I think it turned out beautiful! Almost reminds me of the one i wrote, but i like yours better. :D

//Ari\\

Thanks
For the lovely
Comment
Sunny! It means loads for my puke buddy
To

Give feedback
On my work, so
Again
I
Must thank you for your kindness and insight

Did
You know
That i had
To have teachers
Tell me that i'm more mature than my age?

*Hahaha i wrote something in English class about my insight on success and the teacher told me that i was mature for my age...well at least someone around me has finally said that. :P

//Ari\\

Bob, I love
Your Child-
Like humor, that's
One
Thing that many adults lose when aging

:D

How
I miss
This thread, it's
Drowning in lack
Of interest, it longs to be pulled back up

//Ari\\