WOW you guys are so gifted

Wow. Im new to the site and every poem i have read here is GREAT . You alll are so gifted its amazing. Any way.. I neeed you're guy's advice on some poems. Im trying my best to add more for you to read but hopefully you'll start commenting on some soon. I need all the advice you can give!

Hey i will cheak out some of your poems.. i personally think that poems that rhyme are the best.. so thats a start right? then i think that poems shouldnt be that short.. If they are too short you cant exactly get your point across sometimes.. not as well as you could if they were longer poems anywayz...