WHY??

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    I wrote a poem called "wrap your arms around me" the other day and it has been deleted, I was sent an email, but seen as it has no actual reason or specific broken rule I have no idea why, the poem was not plagiarized and I looked at the rules and cannot see anything I did wrong, I am extremely annoyed as it was one of my best which took a lot of effort on my part, I hope I can have a reasonable explanation for this, thank you..
    xx

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    No I didnt post anything like that in the title, I cant find any reason why it woud have been deleted, I have looked through all the rules over and over, it wasnt plagiarized, I spellchecked it, I had no requests to read/comment/vote, It wasn't in capitals.. I cant think what was wrong with it, and seen as I didnt have a chance to look at my account until after it was deleted, I have no idea if I could have remedied it..

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Yes of course I understand that, I have a copy here if you could just tell me whats wrong with it, I dont write in capitals or anything like that so please could you just explain why

    Wrap your arms around me love, hold me close
    Your sweet breath floating across my skin
    I still feel your fingertips running along my soul
    Like an elixir of prosperity, a cleanser to release my sins

    Words, a gentle melody slinking throughout my mind
    Feeling your body move gently in time with your heart
    Our souls entwined next to the babbling brooks
    Tearing me gently whilst we are apart

    Hand in hand with your eyes holding my attention
    To be with you always throughout dawn, noon, night
    Soft tones intoxicated my fiery emotions
    Simplicity within tender moments chase traces of fright

    Long, winding pathways strolling inside my mind
    Belief in a road leading to upmost redemption
    Enthralled by beautiful eyes gazing back at me
    Fiery breaths creating each complex connection

    Darkness dispersed slowly by the tendrils of hope you send
    Flitting swiftly, a sparrow among a flock of ravens
    Sleep swept beneath the crimson carpet
    Aphrodite spreads petals with a new path awakened

    Candlelit conversations deep in mindful discussion
    Lying asleep next to grassy river banks, brooks and streams
    Seamless robes woven with gold from each heartstring
    Lost, time forgotten, living each others dream

    A kiss, lips so soft pressing against mine
    Alighting passionate fire within each inch of my heart
    Vines hanging from the cracked stone ceiling
    My hand closes around yours whilst the demons depart

    Wrap your arms around me, empowering emotion
    My heart is yours darling with my love and devotion

    And the title had no requests or anything in it as I dont do that either..

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Please, just so I can clear this up..

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    well if you insist there is nothing wrong with it, thenit sounds like a mistake. I'd suggest asking Janis about restoring it if there really aren't any violations