Mr shank

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Ok, you said my poem "wrap your arms around me had capitals or funny lettering, I can assure you it didnt, here is a copy as it was on the site..

    it was also an original piece

    Wrap your arms around me love, hold me close
    Your sweet breath floating across my skin
    I still feel your fingertips running along my soul
    Like an elixir of prosperity, a cleanser to release my sins

    Words, a gentle melody slinking throughout my mind
    Feeling your body move gently in time with your heart
    Our souls entwined next to the babbling brooks
    Tearing me gently whilst we are apart

    Hand in hand with your eyes holding my attention
    To be with you always throughout dawn, noon, night
    Soft tones intoxicated my fiery emotions
    Simplicity within tender moments chase traces of fright

    Long, winding pathways strolling inside my mind
    Belief in a road leading to upmost redemption
    Enthralled by beautiful eyes gazing back at me
    Fiery breaths creating each complex connection

    Darkness dispersed slowly by the tendrils of hope you send
    Flitting swiftly, a sparrow among a flock of ravens
    Sleep swept beneath the crimson carpet
    Aphrodite spreads petals with a new path awakened

    Candlelit conversations deep in mindful discussion
    Lying asleep next to grassy river banks, brooks and streams
    Seamless robes woven with gold from each heartstring
    Lost, time forgotten, living each others dream

    A kiss, lips so soft pressing against mine
    Alighting passionate fire within each inch of my heart
    Vines hanging from the cracked stone ceiling
    My hand closes around yours whilst the demons depart

    Wrap your arms around me, empowering emotion
    My heart is yours darling with my love and devotion

    And the title had no requests or anything in it as I dont do that either..

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Ah see because once I have posted a reply which should clear things up, I dont go and check, it had nothing at all in the title or anything, thats why I am confused, if there was a reason i could see it would be understandable but I cant see any reason for it being deleted.. :S

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    :( I just want everything sorted out..