My very first poem ever

"You'll Never Know"

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=101298

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This is the first poem i ever wrote. I don't know too much English but the words just came out (there might be some spelling errors... please forgive 'em :P )

Could you please rate it and comment ?

Thanks.

hiya i've read your poem and commented on it
good work.
could you please have i look at my newest one and comment
please
thanks jemma xxx

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