wow am i slow and new neat huh

ok weell probly get the burn in the other fourm that i posted this but such is life well let me say im new to this place so feel free to getahold of me if anyone wants to talk bs or just talk about the weather ya know ... anyhow i have posted a few poems in the thingy and would really like feedback on them if ya all dont mind sure would be great thanks a mill
Dave

yes yes in deed it truely is a fine fine day hmm its night and its cold what in the name of all that is holy am i talking about oh wait well hello

where do i live well its like this i live in a small town a town that is so small so no nothing its not very importaint but since u aske the town i live in is called Cuba City small town in south west wisconsin i hate it here help me get out will ya they have captured me and wont give my ship back