Stumped :( (not just some attempt to make you read)

I will take a look and see if I can offer any advice

OK, well firstly, I liked it, although it kind of creeped me out, I enjoy dark poetry, secondly as for an ending, i reckon leave it how it is, as it seems to have a sence of it being finished yet leaving the door open to another poem, it keeps and air of mystery and darkness in my opinion..

I'll take a look at your poem to, and I'll make any suggestions I have at the poem post

Ok, for the ending, try something about the child. Or...wait, is this the veiw of the child? Well, hmm...I think you should clarify that a little more. In the end, put something in that shows a strong emotion or a seek for revenge. Like, have some regret or a deep sarrow or years and years later reflecting on that time, oh, maybe on her death bed, reveiwing her life and summing up its worth before she dies. Well, I hope I helped. I wont vote until you officially finish it, k? nice job so far.

I wrote that for a comment, so, yeah, hope that helps. meowness.