hi i need your advise!!

hiya, i've just lost a friend who ment alot to me, and i cant seem to make him realise how much he ment so i've wrote him a poem but before i can give it to him, i really need some comments to tell me what you think!!

your comment would be really appreciated and i would return the favor by commenting on yours!!
thanks jemma xxx

wow that waz one of the most amazing poems i have read and i put you one my faves!

hiya thanks, and thanks for adding me to your favourates, you've been on my list for a bit know
jemma xxx