I put two songs/poems up on Myspace but no friends!

I just added you. =)

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I just heard your song "Momentary Day" it's fairly nice. May I suggest you sing more and talk less? I know you weren't talking, but you're not neccesarily singing either. You only raised your voice at certain cords. Most of the time it sounds a bit dull, you have a nice voice, take advantage of that.

"My Carry On" Sounds a bit more like a song, but it's too similiar to "Momentary Day"

I like "Save Tonight" the best. Good job, M'Dear.
Now "Who Will Save Your..." sounds a bit like "Save Tonight". Another suggestion, maybe you add something other than a guitar?

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