What's your worst poem?

  • Truest Lies
    19 years ago

    Um...I guess "Thank You" wasn't very good, but I meant it, and that's what matters.

    -beth

  • SexMeister69
    19 years ago

    All of mine are good! What are you talking about! Hahahahahaha. Nah, really, all my poems are stupid compard to some of the other poets' poems in here.

  • Amanda Bee
    19 years ago

    A poem I wrote titled "Distracted". I just don't like it very much.

  • Bill Turner
    19 years ago

    My worst poem or poems would be ones that have gone unwritten, for lack of time or desire. If the idea didn't force me to make time, it wasn't worth writing about.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    It's a tie between "bitter mind" and "distant tears." They're really old ones of mine and so, so, bad. If I had to critique my own work I could write for hours on how lacking they are. I do have a few more I'm not all that keen on, but if I mentioned all my bad poems, i'd be listing quite a few.

  • Andrea
    19 years ago

    oh i have to many of those, i cant pick.

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    I guess...
    *I Swear I've Tried
    *The Song Of Your Smile
    *Letting Go

  • Lyla
    19 years ago

    probably "the wayi used to be" meh....

  • Lyla
    19 years ago

    *way I

  • AGirlWorthFightingFor
    19 years ago

    "A Writer's Rights" but it was written to be cheesy.

    Oh, and any like "disconnected" (not posted) or "barbie doll shoes" or any of the ones that say 'life sucks, and responsibility is so hard,' is just me -- whinging!

  • Feline Fatigue
    19 years ago

    definatly "Black Skull". I wrote it while I was angery, so I wasn't thinking straight. I was also young and unexperianced at the time.

  • Daniel J
    19 years ago

    Not everything one thinks must one say,
    not everything one says must one write,
    and not everything one writes must one publish.

    Therefore the worst poem, of course, is not one with the lowest rating: it's the one the author regrets publishing.
    ----

    Oooh, look. I sound all weird and wise.

  • shes ♥suicidal
    19 years ago

    "tammy"... my worst one.... but yeah.... who cares

  • jon clodfelter
    19 years ago

    "Halo 3"

  • x-Beth-x
    19 years ago

    "My First Kiss" "The Way" and "The Way I Feel" I hate those poems but I had to get out my feelings somehow.

    ♥~Anarchy~♥

    I ♥ Cereal

  • TinyDancer46
    19 years ago

    lol probably.... down in that old graveyard. I wanted it to come out touching, and to have people like it, but it just came out wrong and retarded... I posted it anyways though. ha ha oh well

  • BECLiKEW0AHH
    19 years ago

    mines probly "if i" well its not bad i just didnt put much into the ending.

  • Joey Matthews
    19 years ago

    god we'd be here all day... alot of my old poems are crap, mainly from my youth days (old account)

    i'm so sure about my newer ones, i feel there better then what i used to write..

  • Cantchangeme
    19 years ago

    Life by me that one sucked more than imne usually suck

  • Tim Bradshaw
    19 years ago

    The ones that remain unposted are what i feel the worst but i feel my worst one posted is "to be in love" i really meant every word though so it will stay posted

  • Sad_Little_Kitty_Kat
    19 years ago

    i think it would have to be
    "i hate you"
    i guess bcuz i didnt really try
    on that poem!

  • Ariana
    19 years ago

    My worst would be 'invisible' it's not meant to be self-deprecating, I even put a footnote at the end saying this but it still sounds as if I am complaining about myself.

  • Dolores DLF
    19 years ago

    I believe that some of MY poems are shit only because they remind me of the pain when I wrote them. Some of them are too long and some of them are too vague and even some are too personal. I haven't read "Coming clean" I will though as soon as I can. U couldn't possibly think its complete shit. Don't be so hard on URself. I believe as long as U thought it, it couldn't be shit!!
    Take care! Bye.

  • Ashleigh Skye
    19 years ago

    hm... sum of my earlier stuff I dont like 2 much