Need help with a title for my poem

  • Aken Sol
    20 years ago

    I don't know... this might sound corny but i was thinking The Moon and The Sun could be a possible title. Because When the sun rises, the moon sets and vice-versa and they only occasionally meet.
    Aken Sol

  • julie
    20 years ago

    Hey the moon and the sun is a really great one!
    Unreacheable desire? Or i know it sounds really simple but my angel-cos you cant be together? But i prefer the moon and sun one!

  • Aken Sol
    20 years ago

    your welcome. Anytime you need help, just gimme a ring
    Aken Sol

  • bneathxmyxeyesx3
    19 years ago

    A title I think would be The Locked Entwined Couple.

    It is kindof COrny. But I don't know. I thought of that Title because it was part of your poem and then mixed things around.

    I find titles sometimes by using text in my poem and mix things around. I think this poem fits it because the poem reminds me of two people who are very affectionate for eachother and when they lock hands and *entwine* the have a sensation that they wouldnt have with anyone else.

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    What about: Close to my heart but so far apart.

    Regards,

    Steve