CHECK OUT THIS POEM-- SERIOUSLY!

  • shes ♥suicidal
    19 years ago

    woah... that really is really good

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  • TinyDancer46
    19 years ago

    that is really good!!

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  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Creative writing!

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  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    Wow, you're right, Annelyse. It was pretty damned stunning.

    This thread needed to be bumped so that others would pay attention to it.

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  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    agreed.

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  • Sean Allen
    18 years ago

    it's because Doug -- the oldthreadphiliac -- ressurected it.

    Still a good poem though.

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  • Goran Rahim
    18 years ago

    wow, great poem

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  • Catherine
    18 years ago

    Call me retarded, but I really don't see the beauty in it. I mean, I have read more meaningful poems. 4 more meaningful poems, to be exact.

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  • RainbowSlider
    18 years ago

    I love poetry.

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  • Sweet Toxicin
    18 years ago

    i 'twould like ye all to read Sweet Toxicin's poetry.

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  • Ed or Ian Henderson
    18 years ago

    The last line spoilt the flow and imagery of the whole poem. Sorry.

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  • Imogen
    18 years ago

    I'm sorry but I agree with Catherine and Ed... It's good, but not great... These two lines are excellent;
    and teases the gray scarf hang'd round her neck;

    the frayed ends meet with a cloud's kiss.
    but are let down by the rest of the poem. I don't think it's that brilliant myself, but hey that's just my opinion! And I also think it would be somuch better without that last line

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  • Brittney Follett
    18 years ago

    its not exactally totally, jaw dropping amazing.. its alright i guess

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  • RainbowSlider
    18 years ago

    Thanks for the heads up on that poem. I liked reading it. Truly a work of art.

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  • Bhavin
    18 years ago

    whoa... its a gr8 poem... i think these kinds of poems should be carved n preserved lik a manuscript....

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  • iloveyouubabyy
    18 years ago

    wow thats veryy good !!!
    take care

    -sam

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  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    cool it good :)

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  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    cool it good :)

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  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    cool it good :)

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  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    cool it good :)

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  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    cool it good :)

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  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    cool it good :)

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  • Kirsty palmer
    18 years ago

    wow.. your write! great write!

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  • Catherine
    18 years ago

    Very nice

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  • BrokenMisery
    18 years ago

    This is getting old... this ONE post has been going for almost a year. Great Poem, yes but can we move on?

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  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    ^
    Lol.

    Does someone have a problem with reading poems?

    I always thought that that was the point of this site.

    I say "Lol" once again.

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  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    lol good poem. :)

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  • gummy_bear_exocutionist
    18 years ago

    it wasnt that great, i dont understand the big deal

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  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    ^ Not many do.

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