Adam Detzner's Poetry Contest #3 - Theme and Variations

Wow not sure if I can do this or not but really does sound like fun and something new to try.

THEME =I thought of you again yesterday

Variations ==

I was walking in the park the very same way
When the scent of your perfume blew in my face
I thought of you again yesterday

How do I write this paper anyway
Too many memories get in the way
I thought of you again yesterday

If today was really tomorrow anyway
Then it safe for me to safely say
I thought of you again yesterday

I don't understand...Do we have to use the theme at the end of the stanza or what? And is it one theme through the whole poem?

Yeah...I'm definitely willing to give it a try...But I'm confused. :)

Adam, was my poem anywhere close to being what you are looking for???

I will give this a try...be back in a few days with my poem:)

Yeah, same for me.

me 2

Theme : Trying to kill some useless time

Variations~

Trying to rite, and make it rhyme
My mind is deluded with pain
Trying to kill some useless time

I love you so much, the more I climb
Lost love, staring at a blank wall
Trying to kill some useless time.

I love the autumn its so sublime
Like a broken season, I just sit and wait
Trying to kill some useless time

haha that was seriously fun....

Sorry I didn't get one in in time...I'm not gonna post now because it's the 8th. But anyway...It was a good contest and I'm sorry more people didn't enter.

Very:P

Is this contest over --- Or should I try again

lmao this should go in the fun section!

(contest ppl: uh huh.?. *sarcasm*)

I haven't been on in...Forever...But I suppose I'll post my poem now, then, if it's okay.

Bulldozed Regrets (You Knew That You Were Wrong)

When the last drop fell
From the many-rained sky,
And the last tear fell
From your over-cried eyes,
I was still standing there,
Heart pounding too long
Waiting for the moment
You knew that you were wrong.

My mind had crumbled
My body fell, too.
But my soul stayed waiting
Hopelessly for you.
My love was such a burden
Because I knew yours was gone.
Though impossible, I wished
You knew that you were wrong.

I had already waited forever,
But still had eternity to go.
I stood there, looking helpless
And more hopeless than you know.
Yet you looked into my eyes
And saw that my will carried on,
And with the choices that you had made,
You knew that you were wrong.

Yeah, I wish more people would post.

But it was fun. After I was done. :)

Seriously...You people should try this. It really is fun.

lol, so didnt this end on the 7th? or are u waiting until there are more posts to give the places?lol