Ne 1 in da military??? or have family in the military!!

Hey my name is Hillary Starz,
I wrote this new poem and its about a girl who writes a letter to her brother in the military. Well check it out and tell me what you think.

If you have ne sugestionz plez comment.

Hi my name is Jennifer, I recently wrote a poem about a father who dies in iraq it's called usa daddy... I have a best friend like a sister going to iraq in a week... I will read your poem hillary