Hey Sunny, or anyone from that other club...lol

  • Atomic
    19 years ago

    Haha....how about ducks? =)

    I'll settle for bunnies...

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Bob, here is my effort : -

    Water Pollution, Is it too late?

    Never mindful of what our progress brings,
    we carry on with our selfish ways.
    Everything done in the name of improving our fate,
    but what price does our progress actually bring?

    Expose and exploit our natural resources,
    only to produce new and increasingly materilistic things.
    All the industrialization spewing effluents into the air,
    into our precious water systems.

    Polluting our eco-systems, then bring acid rain.
    Many toxic wastes flow unchecked to the water table.
    Dangerous chemicals and hard metals that leech
    and pollute our streams and flow to the sea.

    A vicious cycle that repeats itself with each day.
    Our efforts to keep our water supplies clean,
    simply cannot keep up with our hectic pace.
    One day we shall reap the consequences of our carelessness.

    We are all poisoning our seas and lakes,
    till all is too late and we have sealed our own fates.
    Polluting our waters, our very own pure life sources
    and diminishing valuable food chains.

    Can we really survive, with such savage
    contamination that is just so great?
    Can we think and do something,
    before our mother earth dies?

    Our precious water supply is what
    we need to live or else we shall all die.
    Yet we continue to defecate such wastes
    at such alarming rates.

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Nada, what the heck that was damm awesome!

    Thanks Katie.

  • cowgirlstar26
    19 years ago

    this is about my horse goddess
    when I refer to (turn and burn) we barrel race at rodeos and stuff and thats like her nickname
    this was really cool, thx for including me bob

    head held high
    eyes ablaze like fire
    when anyone see's her
    they ask "who's her sire"

    like a new penny
    her chestnut coat shines
    I'm proud of her
    this horse I call mine

    muscles ripple upon each movement
    she's so close to perfect,
    there's no room for improvement

    with the speed of a fleet goddess
    that's how she got her name
    an angelic figure, that will take your breath away

    when she runs down a road
    her hooves sound like thunder
    people look out
    and stare in wonder

    her beauty undefined
    speed unmatched
    she'll turn and burn
    a barrel in a flash

    the crowds scream
    as we reach the time line
    on to the college finals
    my love for her I won't deny

    she has saved my life
    and I have saved hers
    were like 2 spirits in one
    only she has fur

    two young hearts
    wild and free
    when I sleep at night
    it's about this horse I dream

  • HOLLY ARMER
    19 years ago

    Sweetenigma: "Ok getting started on tornados...hows urs going holly??"

    Well, I find it quite hilarious that I live in tornado alley and have yet to find the inspiration to write this. Also with the devestating tornado's that just hit Kentucky and Indiana should provide a basis, but still nothing!
    I think this is gonna be harder than writing about river rafting, which is just crazy.

    Oh and Marketer....the piece you posted is beyond words. I live in Oklahoma and just wow! Very eye opening and so full of truth. Outstanding!

  • Bill Turner
    19 years ago

    Sunny & Bob, here it is:

    Music

    The entire world is my soundtrack
    Everything is music to me
    Sound and memories flood back
    Never letting me be

    I associate songs with people and events in my life
    Friends and family all have a theme song
    “If I only had a brain” for the ones giving me strife
    Walk in my shoes before you tell me this is wrong

    “On the road again” for the birth of my son
    As I spent six hours hitch hiking to hold him tight
    “Margaritaville” for those evenings of fun
    Parrothead music and tequila lasting all night

    Thundering explosions and screams of pain
    Mark the soundtrack to a time I was stabbed
    “Welcome to the jungle” falling like rain
    Hearing that song I flashback to being grabbed

    A special soundtrack for the woman I love for life
    “Satisfy my soul” pounding out a beat in my heart
    “Broken road” when sung by the woman to be my wife
    Filling me with love knowing we will never part

    Music has meant so much to me
    It is there for all that I do
    At times it was all that kept me free
    It will be there until I am through

  • Cory Mastrandrea
    19 years ago

    hahahaha

  • Bill Turner
    19 years ago

    Thank you Bob.....

  • cowgirlstar26
    19 years ago

    thats funny bob lol I'll have to bring that to work with me somtime out at the track

  • Cory Mastrandrea
    19 years ago

    Here is mine about education

    I walk the halls of remembrance
    opening doors of long stashed-away memories,
    smiling and laughing, listening and note-taking, chatter and silence.
    I picture myself many years younger
    seated at a desk inside a small room in a far-off school.
    Years full of mistakes and learning now looked back upon with thankfulness and regret.
    Lessons learned over time from both blackboard and asphalt.

    "Education has given me the position I now hold, but not the maturity I have gained through experience."

    Now older, paused outside a door with black numbers stickered on the window,
    I only hope to pass on more than words and analyses of reading lists,
    more than definitions and functions of a noun, pronoun, verb, and the other eight parts of speech,
    more than the ability to write a good paper and get an "A."
    I desire to impart wisdom learned from the harshness of reality, brutality of the world, and the gentleness of love, compassion of a mother;
    Maturity from beyond their years to instill qualities of greatness.
    Things not taught by lectures and chalk, formulas and definitions;
    things taught by reality and living, failure and success.

    I take a deep breath and let it out quickly
    before slowly turning the knob.
    Upon entering, heads turn to see, and noise hushes slightly.
    An airplane flies across the room, and chuckles erupt as
    I put my books upon my desk--the big desk in front.
    I look up and am ready to begin;
    begin instructing and befriending all new faces.

  • Anthony
    19 years ago

    Yes! where is challenger for anthony?

  • cowgirlstar26
    19 years ago

    we should do this more often, this is great, I kinda wish I had spent more time on my poem tho ,cuz I think I could have done better

    awsome poems tho on everyones especially from bobs group ;P but really everyone's poems are really great, I love this site

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    guys the poems are great i read all the new ones! i happen to love horses to, they're such fun to ride i normally go to a week long camp in the summer and ride them almost all day but not this year, which is sad.

    i got my poems, i actually made two for my topic. i figured since it was a writing excersize it was ok.

    Ghost Dance (Etheree)

    Fear
    dances
    all around
    Rhythmic drums
    by fires of the night
    Gathering strengths and hope
    protection from the white man
    A blooming sun in winters chill
    Shots rang, creating a wounding cry
    Another tear falls, the Ghost Dance beats on.

    Listen to the White Man

    Listen to the White Man
    force feeding his beliefs
    changing within a day
    or walk the lonely tails

    Agreements said and done
    changing to be civilized
    Immersed in a White Man's world
    A new belief, a new God

    Wear the White Man's clothes
    walk within his shoes
    learn to love an enemy
    Trade your cultures souls

    Listen to the White Man
    feeding heartless lies
    Forcing you to walk away
    Ad the trails begin to cry

    ~Both are such sad stories in our History. I happen to be talking about The Battle of Wounded Knee in the first one and the Trail of Tears in the second one if you didn't know.

    ~Jacklyn

    continue the awesome work guys!

  • Chelsey
    19 years ago

    Topic: quilts

    GRANNY AND HER QUILTS

    I always listened to Granny
    As she sat in her rocking chair
    I was in awe of what she was doing
    Sewing on square by square

    She sat there by the fireside
    Looking relaxed and at peace
    It was as if Granny was venting while making this art
    With each little stitch, emotion released

    “Now child no need crying
    It’s only a little storm
    Go grab Granny’s hand made quilt
    It will keep you mighty warm”

    I grabbed the quilt like she told me
    One she made two weeks ago
    Sat back down now with cookies and milk
    And continued to watch my old Granny sew

    “You see this pattern I here make
    It’s called the ‘Four Patch’
    You put four squares in a row
    Then underneath another batch”

    She did all sorts of colors
    Yellow, green, and red
    If she got tired of that pattern
    She did the “Log Cabin” one instead

    She knew all sorts of patterns
    Her quilts were best in town
    She made them for the hospitals
    She never got a thumbs-down

    I remember the day she tried to teach me
    I’d rather be out playing instead
    But she showed me how to work the machine
    And to always remember to have spare thread

    I didn’t like the sewing machine
    It was and old one my Grandpa built
    My fingers were bruised and bleeding
    I only sewed half a patch on the quilt

    I think I’ll stick with buying blankets
    When I am cold and unwell
    I’ll sit my grandchildren down and say
    “The better blankets are the ones Target sells”

  • cowgirlstar26
    19 years ago

    yea that quilt is sounded really good right about now It's so cold in MN

  • Chelsey
    19 years ago

    Yes Bob I will sell you my quilt..I don't like it..hence why at the end of my poem I put "The better blankets are what target sells"...lol....

    Although the girl above me ^ seems like she needs in more..she lives in Minnesota..one of the coldist places....probably snowed there already huh?

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Wow, terrific poems!

  • Cherri
    19 years ago

    Chelsey, HAHAHAHAHAHA, Bob, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
    =p
    LMFAO!

    -*-Cherri-*-

  • Anthony
    19 years ago

    Racism??(sp?) ok i can do this!! ^_^ I've been called alot of racist names before!!!

    ~Anthony

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    "very nice Angelina, and Chelsea, that quilt seemed warm, wanna sell it ....lmao"

    ya thanks for reading my poem bob. or you read it and just didn't want to mention me... lol

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Hey Bob, just looked at the photos you took with Angela and Pete, they are great photos!

    So sweat on some more butthead, seriously, how is your poem coming along?

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Sunny Bunny, you're always cute! and don't let butthead, oh I mean Bob ever forget it! LMAO

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    everyone is really making good poems, which is good because it makes it more fun.

    ~Jacklyn

  • HOLLY ARMER
    19 years ago

    Okay, here's mine. My topic was tornado's and once again I have no title! That's been my problem lately, coming up with titles. Anyhoo, here ya go:

    Madness and despair
    fall from such ancient eyes
    Intensifying her temper
    Compassion she furiously denies

    Anger fuels her passionately
    so many centuries of abuse
    Seeking her revenge
    but what method will she choose

    Looking for release
    of tension and constant strife
    Not worried about consequences
    or even the loss of life

    I am her chosen one
    delivering chaotic distress
    Ordered to do her bidding
    putting mankind to the test

    With a brush of her hand
    the rain comes to an end
    In these calming moments
    the real destruction shall begin

    Created from above
    by a twirling funnel cloud
    I sound just like a freight train
    only a thousand times more loud

    With one deep breath
    houses vanish instantly
    Exhaling upon the empty lots
    a lifetime of debris

    Gaining momentum
    I set out on my path
    Creating devestaion
    an unbelievable aftermath

    Terrorizing all
    for many theres no escape
    But as quickly as I started
    I begin to lose my shape

    Dispersing into oblivion
    my thunderous voice now still
    Until I'm summoned once again
    to carry out Mother Nature's will

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Holly, that was awesome, off the hook!

  • HOLLY ARMER
    19 years ago

    Thanks guys! I really struggled with this one more so than the river rafting topic. Which I found strange considering I've been through many tornado's but never rafted a day in my life. But even though it was hard it was still loads of fun.
    Any idea's for a title?

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    "All her fury."

  • HOLLY ARMER
    19 years ago

    Oh thanks much, I like those. Especially Spiral of Disaster! But all three are great! I don't know why it's so hard for me to pick a title. It used to be the easiest part of writing a poem, now it seems to be the hardest!

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    great poem Holly if you are still looking for title suggestions i thought that "ancient eyes" would be kind of cool. because i liked it when you said it in the poem. i was like that was a real cool line. love the poem~

    ~Jacklyn

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    Steve Flash: great job with that topic. that poem is so sad and sweet i just love it!

    ~Jacklyn

  • Ann Stareyes
    19 years ago

    All of these poems are just great.....I love them all.

    Love Ann

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    totally agree!

    ~Jacklyn

  • HOLLY ARMER
    19 years ago

    Beautiful poem, Steve! It really brought back many memories of my grandma and aunts sitting around quilting.

    No Jacklyn, I haven't decided on a title yet. I just can't seem to come up with one that satisfies me. I did toy with the idea of having "ancient eyes" within the title, but who knows!

  • Chelsey
    19 years ago

    Steve *wipes tear*..that was so beautiful....a milliontimes better then mine..U deserve the win for that one that was amazing my friend!!

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    Holly i suggested some more titles for your poem in the club! your poem was awesoe though, i don't remember if i mentioned it

    ~Jacklyn

  • Amanda Bee
    19 years ago

    Sorry it took me so long you guys to post this. But I was away for the last two days. Anyway here goes.

    Topic: Education (learning it or teaching it)

    Raise Your Hand (Acrostic)
    By: Amanda Bee

    "A good teacher is like a candle - it consumes itself to light the way for others." –Author Unknown

    Ready or not child, I’m taking your hand
    Allow me to be your guide down this road
    Illusions and mysteries await you, dear child
    So much knowledge for my glow to unfold
    Enduring this flame in hopes that you will go on

    You are the one who can conquer this road
    Oh, but hurry for there’s so much for you to learn
    Uncovering the darkness of stories untold
    Read, write, learn…I’ll continue to burn

    Honor me with the privilege to teach you, little one
    Are you ready to trek through this mud and this sand?
    Now’s the time, for you are the one who must decide
    Don’t be afraid, you must only raise your hand

  • Amanda Bee
    19 years ago

    Bob notice that there is no mention of Andy or Gomer Pyle...lol! I decide to exclude them in this one.

    Really you crack me up!

  • Steven Beesley
    19 years ago

    Amanda, that was great!

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    good poem Amanda!

    ~Jacklyn

  • Amanda Bee
    19 years ago

    Thanks you guys!

    Bob, I'll give you permission to go tinkle....but first you have to recite your ABC's...and don't stop at the letter 'p'. LOL!