Analyze A Poem

  • Jacklyn
    19 years ago

    True Beauty
    by Lisa marie

    Listen to the birds all sing
    Watch the flowers grow in spring
    Love the earth like she loves you
    Let the sun shine right through
    Rainy days and lonely nights
    Stand upon animal rights
    Ride your life along a river
    Appreciate your mother giver
    Breathe the air and drink the sea
    Climb upon the human tree
    Feel for all with nature's duty
    And forever walk in your true beauty

    This is a lovely poem making a wonder message. The world is filled with such natural beauty but yet we abuse it, miss use it and don’t take the time to fully appreciate it. Few people take the time to love the earth. Today so many people are caught up in electronics and man made things and forget life outside of watching movies or playing video games. We forget Mother Nature and the beauty she brings. I for one don’t take enough time to appreciate it as I should but I still take the time. My grandparents live in middle of the woods and it’s peaceful, I love it. Nature does bring a sense of peace to busy and hectic lives I suggest you take a walk with no headphones in middle of the woods and find a place and just sit and think for as long as you need. It makes things clearer. Wonderful poem.

    ~Jacklyn

  • Matthew A.
    19 years ago

    Trick question from girls
    by Switchblade

    When a girl asks you "does this make me look fat?"
    how the heck are you supposed to answer that?

    You could answer yes, but you better be ready,
    cause if you say yes, on the floor is where you'll be,
    she'll have your arm behind your back and begging for mercy,
    making you wish you would have answered differently,

    You could answer "no", but make sure she's smiling,
    cause if you say no, and your not looking,
    she'll assume your lying, and pain is what she'll bring,
    making you wish you hadn't said anything,

    You could answer with a shrug, but what will that do,
    all that will do is get her pissed at you,
    so don't lie, and tell her what you think is true,
    before she chokes you, and your face starts turning blue,

    Now when a girl asks you "does this make me look fat?"
    this is how your supposed to answer that,
    this is the sentence you should say that shows you care,
    tell her nicely, "you look beautiful no matter what you wear"
    and if that sentence doesn't work to make her happy,
    tell her "Yes, no" or give a shrug, but be ready,
    cause theres no greater rage that a womens fury,
    and if you answer her wrong, she'll have you begging for mercy,

    This poem speaks the truth to me and is funny in a way that doesnt make sence.