I'm 14 and would really like for someone to comment on my poems

Please read them and leave a comment whether good or bad :)

Will anyone please!!!!!
I would really like people to tell me what they think of my fallen and immortal

Please, will someone, i really work hard on them. Please just spare a quick minute to tell me what you think

Serene, I would be happy to read your poems, if you give me a few days, as I am currently busy studying for finals and whatnot. a quick note: you should post this in the forum dedicated to requesting comments, I will move this thread to that forum at some point in the future, I don't feel up to it right now.