A POETRY CONTEST FOR THE GIRLS!!

THIS IS A CONTEST FOR THE SADDEST POEM ABOUT A BOY THAT HAS EVER HURT YOU AND HURT YOU SO BAD THAT TILL THIS DAY YOU ARE STILL SAD
oh yea this contest ends at the end of the month!!
RULES
1:IT SHOULDNT BE LONG
2:YOU HAVE TO BE THE AUTHOR
3:REALLY EXPRESS YOUR FEELING SO MUCH
IT WOULD MAKE ME CRY!!

EXAMPLE

"SHE HAS BEEN FORGOTTEN"
Love is now gone
your in love with someone new
It hurts inside
because i dont have you
the future i cant see
because your not here with me
I cry myself to sleep
because your not here with me
i cry myself to sleep
because we cant be
pain fulls up inside of me
these endless emotions
will always live inside of me
i have no one by myside
i have now been erase
someone else has taken my place
so now our love was a mistake
i love you
you were my first
i gave myself to you
but not knowing
i would soon be forgotten,
not knowing today
i wouldnt be with you

Fairytale Love

The love in kiddish fairytales, they say cannot be real
But I know it is not true, for I have experienced
I have lived the life of Cinderella, and to this day still live
With the most enchanting eyes and words of wisdom
I was sure it would end-just like the story
Happily ever after,though I'm not sure our end was happy
Time flies by when you're in love
It went too fast for me to keep up
What if Cinderella falls for more than one prince?
Is it not in his opinion mistrust?
You promised you'd whisk me away
To a world full of rock and roll
Baby, it was a modern Cinderella story
You were my Prince Charming
Although it ended suddenly
And it felt just like a dream
Sweety, I know it's real
Because no other love like this exists

Remember the part where Cinderella's
Locked up in that little room?
I'm still waiting
Waiting for the friends I know to set me free
Except this time
The prince doesn't want me
I wonder if something comes up next...

because of you

You saw me standing there one night
Because of you I felt alight

You waved me over, asked my name
Because of you I played your game

You gave me a drink, asked me upstairs
Because of you, I didn't feel scared

You were gentle, you were kind
Because of you I gave you mine

You left me there, on the bed
Because of you I now feel dead

i gave you my body and you tore it apart
You took everything
My hopes
My smile
My laugh

You took for yourself
What was precious and true

You took for yourself
What was not meant for you

You tore me up from the inside
Because of you

A part of me died

Into the Darkness
By: Sarah Drew

It's horrible not being with you
I've been throw into the darkness
I'm surrounded by all this hate
That you have for me
My soul has been tortured
My eyes seem as though
They haven't stopped crying since you left
The darkness that encircles me
Consuming all my love
Turning into hate for the world
Despising all who have love
Because I know that I will never have it
You were the only one
It will always be you
I can't hide it anymore
You were the one who brought me
Into the darkness

Convincing myself to hate you,
So I don't have to fall.
I tell myself that I won't hear,
The cry my heart will call.
Over and over in my head,
I relive the memory of us.
But the pain of that is just too much,
I need to focus on my disgust.
You gave me your word,
That you would never hurt me.
You made me the promise,
That you would set me free.
Set me free of worry,
Set me free of care.
Instead you left me all alone,
With my heart to repair.
I hate you for your pathetic lies,
I hate you for your words.
I hate you most for not telling me,
Those stories that I heard.
I'm trying my hardest,
To hate you much more.
But I know in my heart,
That it's you I still adore.
I'm mad at myself,
For ever falling in love.
I fell for your tricks,
I fell from above.
Convincing myself to hate you,
Telling myself no more,
But really I hate me...
It's you that I still adore.

I've got alot of these types of poems, and It's because my bf, who I'm still with (but I don't know for how much longer) cheated on me once with one of his best friends and a friend that I had trusted aswell. It always hurts to be cheated on, but with one of your own friends!...*sigh* Anyway, I can tell by the other poems that I am not alone in this. And I wish each and every one of us strength. Here's to happiness we have yet to find, or perhaps already have? Good Luck All!

U c? it only takes a poem to start off a contest, then it adds on one by each person :) i love all of these poems!

How the Past is Never Forgotten

We always talked as friends,
Flirted as lovers, but
Your girlfriend didn't know
The difference.
Time went by, we grew apart.
You graduated, started working.
My next year in class was lonely,
For I didn't have you by my side.
We didn't play ball anymore,
We didn't see each other at school.
I moved so we didn't live in
The same town, I couldn't run
Into you while you were at work.
Time went by, I'd forgotten
About you. Friends and I
Went to have a good time
Forget about our problems.
But when we ran into you
It brought back so many memories.
We sat in the front row,
Just to sit together.
You kept flirting with me, I
Was thinking of old times.
But just like the past
You never knew how I
Felt about you.

Promises that you made,
But failed to keep.
The sincerity in your voice,
Made me fall deep.

Words that you said,
Did you mean them or not?
I expected too much,
And deserved what I got.

What started as innocent,
Ended in pain.
The happiness you brought,
I could not maintain.

In times we did not speak,
The reasons weren’t clear.
Despite what you did,
I will always be here.

The feelings rush back,
When I see you.
Secretly hoping,
That you feel it too.

I’m edging into this again,
Without any blinders on.
The last time this happened,
I blinked and you were gone.

I’m not expecting much this time,
Seems you like to let me down.
Say you like to see me smile,
Yet always make me frown.

I will just sit here waiting.
Will you notice what you use to see?
Beginning to think what he said was right,
You are just using me.

Knowing me, a sucker for pain,
I’ll wait around anyway.
I will just be here hanging
Off every word you say.

My poem is called Lonely Love...

Why am I so lonely,
When I look up at the sky?
Why am I so lonely,
When I sit at home and cry?
Why am I so lonely?
As I'm walking down the street
Why am I so lonely
Wishing our eyes would never meet?

As I stare up at the sky,
I search longingly for you
Gazing for the perfect star,
Almost touching,
But not reaching
The love so pure and true.

I sit along the window ledge,
tears flow heavily from my eyes
once there was a time
I had you in my arms at night,
Never having to say our goodbyes.

The streets are bare and empty
I walk them late into the night
We used to walk together
Hand in hand we walked,
Our love was all so right.

Some nights I really wish
That I hadnt met you at all
So that when you broke
my heart in pieces
I wouldnt hurt so much
Every time you built me up
Just to let me fall

So I ask myself
Why am I so lonely?
I still dont have a clue
Maybe its because
Im still so in love with you.

The answer is never...

Lately things have been weird
I haven't seen you around old friend
I'm not crazy or obsessed
I just wanna know where you've been

I know things have changed
You moving on and all
I just need your reassurance
Maybe a wave in the hall

But guess this is how it is now
I'm just not good enough
To be considered as your friend
You say you've been busy with stuff

Im not ready to watch you fade away
Fade away like the tears in my eyes
I just can't look at you staight anymore
Not after all your pathetic lies

I won't stand here while you look into my eyes
Tell me that things haven't been weird
Because in your heart you know its true
That you and I have disappeared.

Our souls have taken different paths
But I know I just can't turn away
I run with tears streaming down
Just hoping for a better day

Where have you been, I really need you
Now more than ever
It couldn't be worse timing
And this pain I cant endeavor

I can't help but wonder what I did wrong
How did it come to this when it was fine
Why cant you see thru me to see that im hurting
And no longer do my bright eyes shine

Another shattered heart goes unnoticed
I can't even look at what you've become
Maybe one day you'll come around
And remember where you come from

I'll admit I miss you and think about you
In my mind you always pass by
Remembering your sweet embrace
But I then again I remember your lies

I can hear the empty promises again
I saw the dreamer in me
I saw how I looked at you
But now I see now I was naive

Now I can say you were a nice memory
Something that I'll hold onto forever
And as we say bye, you ask me,
Will you forget me? the answer is never...

--emotionless19*

.....

Forget Me

Wake up and breathe,
You should be happy now, you're rid of me!
Smile and live again,
For you bare nothing, I hold the shame!

Laugh and flirt,
For she will never know of all the ones you've hurt!
Live and take her out,
For she has no reason, your honesty to doubt....

Forget me,
For you couldn't see,
See, all the damage carved into my heart,
For I am the victim of the love YOU tore apart!

Carry on with your life,
For this is not your battle, it's my strife.
Go out and make new friends,
For your life is not the life that will end!

Place her on a pedastel, Hold her high,
For she is not the girl you caused to cry!
Catch her when she falls for you,
For surely that is what you want her to do!

Forget me, I don't exist,
Like the blood that pumps from your heart to your wrists....
Forget me, I am nothing at all,
For I am shattered.... You never caught my fall!!!

Hey lol by the way when does this contest end?

*.::Lest I forget::.*

A love so great the sky would fall,
A love so tender it burns my eyes,
A voice so soft whispers a call,
A tear so clear like the night skies,

An angel fallen from the cloud so warm,
The halo ignites and the fire is born,
Crashing thunder screams a storm,
The sun awakens for the new dawn,

The love so great the sky died in pain,
The love so tender now all fake,
The voice so soft now screams in vain,
The tear so clear now burns and quakes,

In memory I recite a verse or two,
Of the passion and love,
Of my feelings for you,
Of the whitest dove,

In memory of my world with your touch,
Of all the words passed from your lips,
Of now the knowledge of love I know this much,
Of this love I gave my heart and was returned in chips.
*::*
*.::.*
*.::.::.*
*.::Em::.*

Lies True

Behind these eyes,
That shine bold blue,
Hid a secret,
That no one knew.

I shut them well,
A guarded place,
That hid my soul,
My private space.

Then came this boy,
Can you see?
I thought this boy,
Was in love with me.

I lead him in,
He made me whole,
In my space,
To my soul.

He leached my secrets,
From my heart,
He didn't love me,
From the start.

He fed me lies,
That I now hide,
I lived on them,
At least i tried.

Now this face,
Makeup hides
The deepened scars,
He left behind.

Laura
XxX

i cared about him so much,
i suppose i still do,
but my trust is gone,
and my love is not going to follow through.

i cared so much,
and i want to carry on,
but i know that i will get hurt,
i will do the right thing,
i have let him go.

he still hurts me,
he can still make day,
and i still find my slef liking him,
yet hating him.

i wish i had never met him,
i wish that i had never seen him,
never seen his sweet kindness,
i wish we had never met.

we share oposing thoguhts,
have different morals,
were not made for each other,
and i wish with all my heart we had not met.

if i had never met him,
i would not have hurt,
i owuld not be here now crying,
i would not be faking my own happiness.

i would not feel my heart shatter everytime i saw him,
saw him upset or hurt,
i know i should be over him by now,
but i can't and wish we had never met.

i am happy i met him,
i have learnt a lot,
but i wish i had never seem him,
never met him,
never layed eyes on him,
never looked into his eyes,
and most importsntly never let him get so close to me that he had the power to hurt me.

i hate him,
yet i love him,
whatever my feeling i still wish,
with all of my heart and sould,
that we had never met!!!

You knew I scarred easily
by Tainted Mikochan

I don't understand why you find it funny that I hurt
And how you can laugh at me when I trip and fall
Is our love just some sick game for you
Why do you yell insults at me down the hall
You know me so well, you know how fragile I am
And how easily I can shatter and brake
Are you just pretending to care once and a while
I fall for you again, I fall prey to you game again
It's a double sided game the one you always play
Switching from gentle love to venomous hate
Your truth and lies swirl together, confused us both
You say you still care, yet desert me in dire need
I can't stand this, I have to stop my sweet addiction
Of being so dependently in love with you
Because you keep punishing me for the past
Convinced that I deserve additional suffering
Yet you still have not bothered to ask about
The price I'd already paid for loving you
The long prices, shallow and deep, purple and red
A sum higher than you will ever know
I loved you and you spitefully used me
You cut me deep and emotionally abused me
I fall down to my knees in front of you
Begging you to save me and hold me one more time
But you laugh at me with a cruel little smile
And turn you back on me walking away with another girl
I have always been told I scar easily in multiple ways
Now I know it, my mistake was becoming tied to you
The scars forever show my death because you cut me loose

LAST WORDS

To die is one thing that she craves
Her last remaining will
Sure that once she's dead and gone
There'll be no urge to kill

Streaks of black run down her cheeks
Silent as her grave
Whispers of the blinded truth
She's one they cannot save

Tortured mind and broken soul
A mess without a cause
So many lives she could have had
But someone locked he doors

Only one path left for her
Self inflicted pain
Cutting was the only way
She kept herself half sane

Never let herself be loved
It would hurt too much
No one would stay with her
Through hurt and tears and such

16 years she has endured
and never has been kissed
her frozen heart begins to melt
it pours out of her wrist

"lie me on a bed of roses
thorns and buds alike.
That represents the way I lived
To heaven now I'll hike"

"My blood will fall just like the tears
from pain inside and out
and of the way I chose to die
there never was a doubt"

"I didn't bleed my body dry,
or choke on crystal tears.
I died because you broke my heart,
I've loved you all these years"

sorry if it's a little long, i can't express myself in a few stanza's.....

because of you

You saw me standing there one night
Because of you I felt alight

You waved me over, asked my name
Because of you I played your game

You gave me a drink, asked me upstairs
Because of you, I didn't feel scared

You were gentle, you were kind
Because of you I gave you mine

You left me there, on the bed
Because of you I now feel dead

i gave you my body and you tore it apart
You took everything
My hopes
My smile
My laugh

You took for yourself
What was precious and true

You took for yourself
What was not meant for you

You tore me up from the inside
Because of you

A part of me died

Why did you leave me like this?
by Tara Kay

I loved you the moment i met you,
Your eyes were the loveliest shade of blue.

You whisked me off my feet,
made my dreams come true.
I wish i told you enough,
how much i really loved you.

You went away on holiday,
i missed you in everyway.
I text you each night,
and rang you each morning.

I need to know why did you leave me like this?

I loved you with all my heart,
and i missed you when we were apart.

We never had a fight,
even when you were late home at night.
You went to work and never came back.
The doorbell rang that evening,
i couldn't get you on your phone.
I was sitting all alone.
The police gave me the news,
you had a car crash,
given you a right bash.
You didnt make it.
I cried and cried.

Why did you leave me like this?

(Dedicated to my love Miles, who died 2 years ago, I miss him in every way. I love him so much)

ruby, you posted your poem because of you twice.
didnt know if you noticed
xx

Why cant we be

Why cant you love me
Say, is it too hard to try
Just open your eyes and see
See how we can fly on high.

We ought to be together
You put me on the rack
Only now it is no matter
I know you wont come back.

I desire for your tenderness
I want to feel your kiss
My relationships are senseless
Cause you're the only one I miss.

hey when does the competition end?

i really loved all of them i have to read them again!!!

suzie, it ends end of the month

ok heres mine...

So, I hear you're going out with someone new,
I guess this means we are forever through.
I bet before you know it, I'll just be a memory,
You won't remember a single thing about me.
I never thought the love flame would die,
At least not so soon, but I guess this is goodbye.
So much for getting married, when I turn 18,
But I'll remember everything, from the Rams to the color green.
I knew a lot about you, that I never told,
And I never will, for any amount of gold.
Think back to before we went out,
How when we were together I'd never pout.
We might've been just friends, but we saw eachother a lot,
You never made me cry, but the happiness was shot.
I can't believe I spent the last week,
Writing the perfect letter of words I couldn't speak.
I was up day and night,
Writing in the dark and light.
It's a good thing I checked your myspace,
Before I sent the message, wow what a waste!
I got no sleep, and for what?
To find out it's too late, and the door is shut.
Well, have a nice day, say hi to your girlfriend,
for me, and tell her you'll love her until the end,
Like you did to me...

(TRUE SORY)

~*Who Cares*~

someone judge this contest...

*groans in an annoying way*

hehe =)

AND THE WINNER IS SARAH DREW!!!!!!!!
ITNO THE DARKNESS
I REALLY LOVED IT IT WAS SO DEEP!!!!!!!!!