sorry poem ....

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    I been over-reacting lately and I said a few things mean to my counselor here lately, that; of course, I did not mean. Can someone please help me find a sorry poem ?

    Thanks.

    Michelle

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    Hum. I haven't really read any sorry poems lately. I could write one, though.

    -beth

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    I need a sorry poem related to .... "I'm sorry for all the hurtful words I say" .... and I'm sorry, but I need to try harder, basically. I'm sorry if you do not believe me, and so forth...

    Thanks.

    Michelle

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    I'm sorry for all the hurtful words I say,
    Once I say something, it begins to stay.
    Stay forever, never leaving your soul.
    I wanted to just let you know.....

    That, I'm sorry for everything I've said,
    I hope you don't think I'm lying,
    I feel like just shooting myself in the head,
    And, I desperately am crying.

    I'm sorry for everything I've done,
    I feel so guilty like everything is bad,
    I feel like right now just getting the gun,
    I just can't be thankful for what I've had.

    As I want to kill myself today,
    I can't stand life anymore,
    Nor can I stay.

    I can't take away this pain,
    I'm tired of everyone,
    Thinking I'm just very insane.

    People don't understand,
    What I've been through,
    They just don't have a clue.

    Please help me,
    I need a friend,
    Some to be there,
    Till the very end.

    Please listen to me,
    Don't judge me for who I am,
    Please don't act like,
    You don't give a freakin damn.

    I need you,
    To understand,
    What I'm going through.

    Please listen to me,
    I need you,
    You just don't have a clue.

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    This isn't very good. Although, it's similar to something I'd like to write to her. Can you please help me come up with something?

    Thanks,

    Michelle

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    I need more like an apologetic poem.... Basically, a poem, apologizing for everything I've said, done, my actions, that I'm not lying, and that I need you to just listen, and believe me, accept me for who I am, and stuff like that.

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    Please have the poem rhyme as well. Thanks!

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    Alright, I'll see what I can do.

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    I'm sorry for every time I turned away,
    Even though I knew that you wanted me to stay.
    I'm sorry for being angry,
    And acting as though my heart was made out of clay.
    I'm sorry for the times I didn't hold you,
    When you cried,
    Because now I know that that day,
    Was the moment our friendship died.
    I'm sorry when I shouted,
    And for the times I didn't listen,
    Because in that special way of yours,
    There were things you wanted to say.
    I'm sorry for not believing,
    Forgive me for deceiving,
    I didn't mean to break you heart,
    I loved you from the very start.

    ....okay, this is a few ramblings that I was thinking of. If you want use a few lines.
    Oh, and the poem that you wrote is good enough, because you yourself wrote it from your heart, and if you meant it, then its worth it all.

    -beth

  • charlene
    18 years ago

    hiya just thought id see if i could help at all

    i really am sorry
    for the things i do
    i regret everything nasty
    i ever said to you

    i know your there to help
    and help me overcome
    the dreadful things ive been through
    or everything i done

    you really do comfort me
    in every single way
    sorry is what you desserve
    thats what im trying to say

    im sorry if i havent listened
    and you felt your wasting your time
    but sometimes i over react
    and maybe cross the line

    please forgive how i have behaved
    it wasnt really me
    deep down i am a different person
    whom soon i hope you see

    sorry if its way off the mark but good luck anyway
    x

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    Awwww....thanks, you two!!! I'm gonna use the poem Charlene wrote. Put it up on the site, and I promise to vote/comment on both of your poems, Beth & Charlene. Thanks!

    Michelle