could really use female input

hey i need a female perspective on some of my poems could n e 1 help pleaze

Okay. I'm not a "woman" but I am a "girl."
If you want I will comment on your poems, giving you my thoughts.

-beth

I like your poems. Your poems based on your life? Sounds like you didn't have one of your parents around through your childhood. Reminds me a little of my life.

not to sure if this is in right catagory though but I will

sure, i'll check em out! look fer my comments soon!
and maybe you can check out mine? if you wanna...
ashes

Why female?

I'll check them out. I read one already and it was very good. I look forward to reading the rest.

hey, i read your poems ... they are great. i can feel the emotion in them. i nearly cried when i read "i lost her" the image it layed in my mind was really clear. it was amazing.
lv kat