a min out your time please

My poem "I need you" i would apprciate it if i could get comments i want to give it to my fiance for christmas but i dont want to if its not any good...please take a min out of your time...i will do the same for you also....i promise

i will have a look but you better post requests like this in the right forum next time or youl get in truble!!

lol thanks for the warning lol...sorry everyone!!

no problem we all have do it one time or the other no biggy