Write a terrible poem

  • SweetSuicide
    18 years ago

    Well i think al poems re good and its own way so there in no way i write a poem the terrible everyone..thinks diffirent

  • Phoebe
    18 years ago

    Ping pang
    The doorbell rang
    I ran to the sliding doors
    and tripped over my shorts
    They fell round my ankles
    As the postman appeared
    I covered myself
    His eyes I feared
    I could see in his face
    The look of discrace
    As he turned on his heels
    And way he raced

  • jess
    18 years ago

    wow that one was goodly bad! (that doesnt make sense hehehhe)

  • Danielle
    18 years ago

    stressed out and grades are dropping
    got a bball game but my shot is not dropping
    tired because I can not sleep
    Hurt because I found out you lied and I'm weak
    Happy because it's friday
    Meaning this weekend i'm gonna par-tay
    but that's not me when i'm stressed i don't solve my problems with underage drinking
    because unlike other teens i use my brain for thinking
    I do what's right because if I don't
    I got parents who care to put up with that they won't

  • Cleo
    18 years ago

    the cat sat
    on the mat
    haha
    beat that

  • Danielle
    18 years ago

    that one is to good for me. lol

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    my eyes are bloodshot and
    my hands keep shaking
    but what the point of vodka
    if it doenst keep u from waking?

    leaning over the toilet,
    in someone elses clothes
    thinking i need another drink
    or a tissue to wipe my nose!

    this isnt my fault!!
    the hangover i have
    its cause that guy spiked my coke
    when i was takin a drag!

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    ha.. a hangover i dont deserve.... i have a headache...

  • Danielle
    18 years ago

    nice one

  • Danielle
    18 years ago

    I don't drink cause i'm athletic
    when i write i can't help it my lines just come out poetic
    I don't care if people like it or neglect it
    We all have our own opinions and I respect it
    sopomore year and yes peer pressure has come
    hey danielle drink this i promise it'll be fun
    but being the honor roll student that i am
    i just look at them crazy saying these can't be friends
    we all make choices and no one is perfect
    because yes i have drank for no real purpose
    To fit in no because those people I don't care about
    People look at me funny because they can't figure me out

  • Latasha
    18 years ago

    it seems like everyone is having fun
    showing how much they can all write
    a crummy poem now and then
    we all have bad days just some more then others

  • Danielle
    18 years ago

    haha yeah

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    jack and jill went up the hill to buy some new cd's..jack fell down and dropped his books..and jill said i like cheese!

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    here i sit
    here i die
    all because
    i went to karabar high