Do These Things Prove???

  • Nee
    18 years ago

    okay I just noticed these weird things in the poems about kisses, hugs, holding each others....
    could these things prove that the person loves you??
    I mean...you only say these things..you dun say about staying by your side...washing away your pains
    what I mean is..: how do you prove he/she loves you in a poem??

    tc
    Lov
    Nema xxxx

  • xღxBeckyxღx
    18 years ago

    You can tell if somebody is in love in their poetry by their language i find. Like i'm in love with my boyfriend, and i express this in my poetry, and everything i do for him. Sure i'd love him to be with me for all of time, and id love him to wash away my pains as you say, but you know what really washes away my pains? When he kisses me and hugs me and holds me in his arms.
    I don't think this has answered your question at all lol..sorry

  • Nee
    18 years ago

    No, I get your point Lol
    thanx for yr reply =)

  • BeautifulDisaster
    18 years ago

    Like they say, Actions speak louder than words.

    I've found it's amazing how much you will find out by just watching someone, the things they do. But dont get too comfortable because actions can be misleading as well, but they could steer you down the right path. Words mean nothing if the actions arent there to prove their meaning.

    In a poem, however, you write whats inside. You dont really think about it you just write what your heart tells you. But I think if you need help expressing love in a poem, how much troubles do you have in real life. If you're in love it should be the easiest thing to express in a poem, eventhough words are not enough, there should always be a way to tell.

  • Nee
    18 years ago

    sure words will never be enough for the one whom I truly love!
    but I just wanted to say...: kisses and hugs ain't everything.they might be very important in a relationship..at least when you're confused, stressed, depressed and so on.. you'll be in need of someone to calm you down. not only by actions, but by words as well.!
    although the essay"Actions speak louder than words."...I dunno I really believe in this essay.
    so yeah, both are very important.
    anyway thanks alot for your reply girls :), I appreciate them
    take care
    Lov
    Nema XxXxXxX