Math and science teacher looking for people to review my poetry

Hey I am VERY new at this and numbers are my thing and NOT the written word. However I have challenged myself to grow and as such I am trying my hand at poetry.

please feel free to review and comment on my poems. I will in turn look at yours and vote and comment as I can.

Thank you in advance for anyone who looks at my work and I am sorry it may not be as smooth as others on this site :)