New Poem

I posted an old poem of mine that I wrote a while ago. Please tell me what you think. Its called Why Lord Why

sure no prob.

To answer your question.. the reason i didnt post it on this site before is because I didnt come on this site til about 2 months ago and i posted all my newest poetry and today i was looking at all my old poetry and came across this one and thought i would post it and see what people thought. Just wondering if I was better before or now.