Need help

hey all i need help on a name for my poem. its called "because i love you'' but i dont think it fits...here it is:

When you look at me
The love in your heart I can see
When you smile that smile
I know it is all worth while
When you hold me in your arms
I feel no alarm
When you kiss me the way you do
I know why I chose to be with you
When you hold me long into the night
Oh, Baby, it just feels so right
When you say "I will never hurt you."
My sky turns from grey to blue
When you say "I love you."
I know that its true
Simply because I love you too!!!

To John Fiorilli,
July 3, 2004

please help me...if you want, email me at pahoney88@excite.com with sugestions

how about: "When You..."

that's a really good poem and I agree ^

Oh, Baby, it just feels so right

That line from your poem seems to express the whole poem.

'When you' is a good name.

Again, This is from 2004. Rainbow Slider, Please stop bringing up old threads!

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