Blood On my Bathroom Floor

Hi, I have written a new poem "blood on my bathroom floor" And it need some feedback so please check it out
and comment and rate, it would mean a lot ot me and I promise I will do the same for you.

And please check out some other poems
"Lonely girl"
"Misery"
"Wonderful again"
and "To me you're special"

thank you so much

have a nice day
hugs and kisses