PLEASE HELP

Ok, guys i would really like it if you would read my poems and tell me what you think, i dont care if it is good or bad, if you tell me bad stuff that will help me improve so please do me that big favor and tell me what you think, i will read ya'll and comment on them too

sure why not

Hey Kia,

I will I mean after all we all here need to help eachother out and not put eachother down like somepeople do here its not fair that people put us down. I think that they do that because they're jellouse of us. But If ya need any help ya can always email me at Beautiful_baby0012@yahoo.com
I'll always be proud to help someone else out after all thats all we can do.