really really important please help

Ok, i have got a question. i wrote the poem called "so tired" for my parents, i dont know if i should give it to them. i not sure if they would understand what im trying to say in it and im afraid that they wont understand. plaese read the poem and tell me what you think of it and tell me what you think that i should do. thanks

I think that I would give that to my parents, in fact I might let them read that (if u wudnt mind...i wudnt say i wrote it...) I don't know your parents so I dont know if they would understand...but I think it is a great poem, and you can always try...

Thanks, yea you can let them read it, it dont bother me, if i didnt want ppl to read them i wouldnt put there her, yea go ahead and show them, it dont bother me at all. See my parents are the brightest ppl, either that or they jus dont wanna understand, they will problly brush it off and be like good poem where did you find it