Why oh why...........

  • xDryTearsx
    18 years ago

    Well guys I feel as if my most recent poems are really bad ... like someone gave me advice on how to improve cuz i was doing something wrong ..
    And now i feel like im trying to hard to not mess up so my poems dont just come to me anymore i have to think when i write .. before i would just write and everything would come to me right away .. but now .. bleh it all stinks. o.O like i think the last two i wrote are really bad. :S
    I dunno what to do.

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    Don't put so much stress on writing perfectly. There's always gonna be room for improvement. The best thing to do is just keep the advice in mind but don't let it hinder your writing. Or you could just write like you always do and then edit it later. Being stressed out really affects your writing, so calm down. Writing should be fun.....Holly

  • xDryTearsx
    18 years ago

    Yea i guess you're right.
    I'll keep that in mind Thanks. :D
    ♥Love always
    ----♥NerdyPants♥
    ((♥DryTears♥))

  • xDryTearsx
    18 years ago

    Thanks ..
    For making my self esteem go down
    And for telling me my poems are bad
    And for giving me more doubt in myself
    You must be such a great writer to tell someone their poetry isnt anything but rubbish.

  • xDryTearsx
    18 years ago

    I dont believe you should tell me something nice to
    make me feel better but you dont have to tell me my poetry is horrible and if it, is you could tell me in a nicer way .. you dont have to be rude to get your point across

    And i cant just forget everything you said because it did hurt me.

  • HansRik
    18 years ago

    I do not want to sound ignorant, but write because you want to, because you feel it, not to please someone. Of course, having someone like your poems is great, but then again, if you write solely for others, then there is no purpose in art, methinks.

  • xDryTearsx
    18 years ago

    I agree but automatically i try to please everyone
    im a people pleaser but i dont try to be its just who i am. o.O
    But then again im not writing to please anyone
    but theres always room for improvment
    im not really writing to make that person who gave me the advice happy im just trying to improve.
    But thank you for your opinion.

  • Itinerisje
    18 years ago

    PERSONAL OPINION:everyone's right