~* New Contest Up! *~

I Wanna Hold You
by Levi

It feels as time stands still when your not here, the people of the city walk around while I stand here waiting for you to come, waiting for you to come and find me lying as I die here in this place.

I wanna hold you, I wanna feel you, I wanna see your lovely face.

Don't ever leave me or else I'll die, don't ever leave me because I'll cry. I'll always love you no matter what, you'll see that soon I'm sure enough.

I wanna hold you, I wanna feel you, I wanna see your lovely face.

I'll love you forever and always will don't ask me why cos I can't explain, the way I feel, when I'm next to you...

I Wish I Could Let You Know
by Levi

I wish I could show you how I feel, the way I feel about you, I love you but you'll never know. I love you with all my heart, all my soul, and I never want to let you go.

When I see you I feel all warm inside. I want to hold, I wanna feel your skin next to mine. I'll love you forever, but I can't explain why.
I just wanna tell you, it tear's me up inside. I see you with another guy and I think I want to cry, cos' I love you so much more, than you'll ever know.

I love you with all my heart, all my soul, and I never want to let you go.

It's happening all once more I don't know what to do. All I know is that I'll love you always, for you and only you.

I wish I could show you how I feel, the way I feel about you, I love you but you'll never know. I love you with all my heart, all my soul, and I never want to let you go.

Please just say the word and I'll be free at last, I no this sounds corny but I couldn't give a rats ass..... I LOVE YOU BABY, THERE I FINALLY LET YOU KNOW!

I love you baby and you the same, I'm glad I'm here with you.....

I Can't Explain
by Levi

I'm running but I don't know why, I see you in the distance your fading away to nothing, to nothing. I think I wanna cry, but I can't Cos I hold it back trying to be a guy. I wish that I could tell you exactly how I feel but I can't explain it's strange I just wanna see you smile.

Stand here with me until the end of time, never go, never leave I want you by my side. Cos I love you all to much and that's the way I feel, I can't explain it but I guess I gotta soon. I love you forever, be sure that it's true. I'll never leave your side no matter what you do...

Here I am again waiting for you to come. In this place I'm all alone with no-one to share my love, I wish that you were here with me, I wanna hold you close, feel your warmth tonight. It just the way I feel and I never want to fight. I don't care bout what we do as long as I'm in your heart. Some guys want the sex and pleasure but all I want is you.

Stand here with me until the end of time, never go, never leave I want you by my side. Cos I love you all to much and that's the way I feel, I can't explain it but I guess I gotta soon. I'll love you forever, be sure that it's true. I'll never leave your side no matter what you do...

I Wanna
by Levi

I wanna be yours and you to be mine, but your with this other guy, I wanna hold you close at night, feel your body next to mine, I love, love, love you baby but I can't explain why, I just feel this way and it'll be like that till the end of time.

I wanna love you, I wanna hold you, I wanna feel you, and make you warm inside, I wanna please you, I wanna go ta sleep with you and wake up to your smile. Cos I'll love always just know it's true, I'll be here forever waiting for you.

You make me feel so warm inside, like I'm snuggled up in bed. You smile and it makes me happy and I never want see you sad. It's strange I've never felt this way not for any other girl, I love you that's for sure, forever until the end of time..

I wanna love you, I wanna hold you, I wanna feel you, and make you warm inside, I wanna please you, I wanna go ta sleep with you and wake up to your smile. Cos I'll love always just know it's true, I'll be here forever waiting for you.

AHhhh SORRY I DIDN'T READ RULE 7 just take my first please

The Gray Girl

She lives, in a house
Painted different shades of gray.
Her family, they blend together
With nothing left to say;
It seems, they turned the mute on
And then all walked away,
So she walks through a soulless world
While their silent movies play.
She walks, into a church
Where only church bells ring.
The minister is on mute, too;
No one hears a thing.
The people try to redeem themselves
Through the unheard lyrics they sing,
And they pay their overdue debts to God
With the money that they bring.
So she walks, to a school
Where no one knows her name.
There, there's no variation to the lessons taught;
All the days are the same.
Now she's learned living is her duty,
And nothing's left to gain
Except an appreciation of color
And familiarity with pain.

oh gosh i'm ever so sorry i completely forgot i'd already entered - i thankyou for forgiving me and i would totally understand if you did want to disqaulify me - i am sorry - what a stupid thing to do

I am sorry I have not been perfect,
During my eighteen years of life.
I am sorry you think I am anorexic,
And that I live life by a knife.
I am sorry I am not the same little girl,
That I was a short time ago.
I am sorry that I feel so much pain inside,
And that you have yet to see me grow.
I am sorry you must look into these cold eyes,
And that I have no confidence left to spare.
I am sorry that I like being away from you,
And that you hate the clothes I wear.
I am sorry for keeping things from you,
And for all my self-destruction.
I am sorry for making you yell at me,
And for causing you have that reaction.
I am sorry for all the times I have sided with Dad,
And for not feeling a bit of guilt.
I am sorry for being the reason you damaged,
The relationship we could have built.
I am sorry for using your best kitchen knife,
To slit my wrist for the first time.
I am sorry for making time spent with me,
Have to feel like a crime.
I am sorry for not giving you hugs when you want them,
And I am sorry for resenting you.
I am sorry for not having the same beliefs,
And for always making you argue.
I am sorry I do not like you,
And that I cannot forget things you have said.
I am sorry that each and every day,
Those words go through my head.
I am sorry for never calling,
And that I do not miss you at all.
I am sorry you had to see me at my worst,
Sorry you had to see me fall.
I am sorry I am not the perfect daughter,
And that I am not who you thought I would be.
I am sorry, mother, for letting you down,
I am so sorry for being me.

aaah.. no need to disqualify anyone...
A message to levi... your first poem counts. ;)

love,
~* Tash *~

Please Don't Say Good-bye Phillp

Sweet whispers of a loving good-bye haunt the shadows of my mind,
I wish to depart as loving friends, I stand with a broken heart and soul
What am I to do? This was your choice and again I must pay the price...
Must I really lose you too?

Empty words of I'll see you soon, echo through my hollow room,
You hate me, I love you and with tears of confusion, I pace the floor.
Why couldn't I make you happy, why can't a put a smile back on your face
Must I lose something so dear?

I was never good at final farewells, and I didn't know that was my last
Please tell me I'm mistaken, Tell me my nightmare will be over soon,
Break- ups are hard, but watching you leave my life so willingly kills me
Must this be our end?

With a tear soaked face... I say good bye to an empty room and a love

By Pure Silence,

one more day people! :D

right,.....It's closed, locked.
Results will be with you shortly.
Thank you all for entering in this compatition, I like all of the poems submitted.

take care,
~*TasH*~

THE WINNERS!

nr.1
~* Charlisha - My nasty grind (not ussualy my sort of poem, but it's amazingly written!) *~

nr.2
~* The insane voice of reason - the gray girl (amazingly written I love love love it!) *~

nr.3
~* Hawaiizangel - corrupted angel (very nice indeed, it kinda made me feel like the angel... so without a doubt you should be in the top3!)

nr.4
~* EVERYONE ELSE!!! *~

Well, I can definitely say thank you and mean it...there were a lot of really awesome and touching poems submitted to this contest.

So thanks. :)

seeing as it has been a hectic couple of days... I will start commenting, reading and rating tomorrow...
Thank you all for participating.. I love you guys' work!

still working on the awards ya'll ;)

The Other Side

There once was a girl
Who never showed
The other side of herself
She was always ecstatic on the outside
But what no one knew was that
She was very depressed on the inside
Never writing her feelings down
She just bottled them up inside
Until she exploded
Having thoughts of suicide
But never going through with her plans
Because she thought about her friends and family
And what they would do if they ever lost her
But one day
She couldn't take it any more
She ran away from home
And she was never seen again
What happened to her?
No one will ever know
Except for her and God

wauw that's beautiful! =)
But, sadly, I'm sorry the contest is closed...

best of wishes,
~* TasH *~

WOW! I think I want to rate/comment al these poems too! Here I go.....

In return, can everyone read my one poem: Please Hold Me Tight?

Thank you!

Michelle

~*Who Cares?*~ -- what is the name of your poem posted on here?

Thanks,

Michelle

Steph--what is the name of your poem?? Starting out... Dear God....

Thanks!

Michelle

Loveless Ritsuka --- where is your Grandpa poem? I'd like to rate/comment it. I have a great relationship with my Grandpa as well, and if something ever happened to him, I'd feel sad and empty inside, like you.

Michelle

(((((((((((((((Hugs To Everyone))))))))))))))))

Loveless Ritsuka --- your Grandpa poem is soooo sad... don't give up... ok ?
You're a great inspiration for those, who've been through the same thing.

Hugs,

Michelle

~*Who Cares?*~ --- Great poem... since, I cannot rate it, I will tell you what I think here. Excellent. Keep up the great work.

Michelle

Steph --- great poem. Well expressed. Excellent work. Wonderful!

Michelle

SSSAAMMMYY -- what is the name of the poem you posted? Thanks.

Michelle

Pure Silence.... --- where is your poem: Please Don't Say Good-bye Phillp? So, I can rate/comment it.

Thanks.

Michelle

Hello everyone:

If I missed anyone or didn't read their poem, I'm sorry. I just LOVE reading poems... and if anyone wants to request any, feel free to.

In return, I just ask for everyone to, please, please read my one poem: "Please Hold Me Tight," and tell me what you think. I promise to leave feedback, ratings/comments! Thanks... and if I forget--please remind me.... it doesn't mean I hate you, just maybe busy... hehe!

Big Hugs, everyone did a GREEEEAT job! Wonderful work ppl!

Hugs,

Michelle

Ps... if anyone needs a friend, just holla, I'm here for EVERYONE!

hello all... I'm glad that someone unlike me has been commenting and rating.
I will get on it as soon as possible.

I love your guys's work and it needs the attention it deserves.

due to personal reasons I haven't gotten around to getting to all of you... but I will as soon as I can. I promise.

thank you all,
~* TasH *~

Tash,

Don't put yourself down... it's cool. I'm sure they understand... anyway, I do... I have personal problems going on too, but still, I'm not perfect, no matter how hard I try to be.. hehe! :o)

Take care, hon,

Michelle

I rated/commented everyone... and if I forgot someone, let me know...

Excellent work ppl!!!!

Hugs,

Michelle