heey i need a poem please:)

  • BrokenxLaughs
    18 years ago

    Sorry I don't..but I can try to write one if ya'd like me too?

    Lemme know! :)
    Kristyn

  • Kaity
    18 years ago

    Body: David=9th grader-Bobby best friends with david
    Sara=7th grader

    Everyday David comes to Sara's house to hang out with her brother, and Sara likes David alot and David likes Sara but he doesn't want anyone to know because she is a seventh grader.DO NOT IGNORE!!!!!!!

    Friday:

    David in is on the phone with Bobby, Sara hear he is coming over to watch the game. Sara gets all dressed up for David.
    2 minutes later
    David comes in...

    David- Yo Bobby, you home?!
    Sara- *smiling* Oh he's getting dressed
    David- *smiles* Okay then I'll wait
    Sara- Uhmm do you want a drink?
    David- Okay, but i don't want to bother u, I can get it
    Sara- Oh it's cool, I'll get it

    Sara walks slowly behind his back and smiles....few seconds later she comes out with the drink. Sara accidently spills the drink on the floor, and almost fell. David grabs her by the waist before she could fall. They looked at eachother...

    David- Are u okay?
    Sara- Yeah thanks...
    David- Uhmm...so...
    Sara- I'll go get some more drinks
    David- No, its okay... uhmmm you can sit down if u want
    Sara- Okay-*quietly sits*
    David- How is school...anyone u like
    Sara- No...
    David- Is it cool if i crash here tonight?
    Sara- Of course... why not
    David- Is anyone else coming besides me
    Sara- Yeah, my cousin
    David- Okay, I didn't want you to feel like the only girl
    Sara- *Nods and smiles*

    7 minutes

    A knock comes to her door... it was her cousin Nikki...Sara jumps and whispers ''he's here'' they went to sit down and watched the game.... a few minutes later they got bored so Nikki went up to Sara's room.

    Nikki- So u really like David huh?
    Sara- Yeah, but i don't think he would like a seventh grader
    Nikki- Well how'd you know?
    Sara- Ummm because he is a ninth grader
    Nikki- Ask him.. just say do u like me?
    Sara- NO!!!! Are you crazy he might think im wierd

    5 minutes

    Bobby and David were downstairs watching the game. It was half time. They started talking about some guy stuff. Bobby saw what happened when his sister spilled the drink, he didn't want his best friend to date his sister. He saw Sara and Nikki listenig and peaking through the door crack.He smiled and began to talk, pretending he doesn't see them

    Bobby- Do you like my sister?
    David- NO! *nervous* c'mon man she's a
    Bobby- Yes you do
    David- NO! I said no already why don't u believe me
    Bobby- Why don't you like her
    David- She's not my type and she's ugly
    Bobby- Whoa! Okay ...

    Bobby sees his sister like she is about to cry... then Bobby feels guilty. It was dinner time and Nikki ordered pizza. David looks at Sara and smiles. Sara looked the other way with her eyes about to water. David looked confused.
    43 minutes

    The pizza came. Bobby paid for the pizza and everyone took a slice exept for Sara.

    Nikki- Hey i thought you said you were hungry, why aren't you eating?!
    Sara- *nods slowly while looking down* Not hungry.
    Bobby- C'mon Sara eat... you know you want to.
    Sara- *Nods slowly*
    8 minutes

    Sara walked to her room while everyone was eating.

    Nikki- What's up with Sara, she loves pizza.?
    David- Is she mad?
    Bobby- Iono... Nikki go talk to her
    Nikki- Leave her alone she'll come down

    37 minutes

    The game starts and Sara still hadn't came down. Bobby knows what he did was wrong.

    Bobby- Aye yo David go talk to Sara.
    David- But she's mad
    Bobby- *throws a pillow at him* Shut up, and try to make her come down.

    David goes up nervously and knocks on the door. Sara opens the door.

    Sara- What?
    David- Uhmm the games starting, Wunna watch it?
    Sara- *rolls her eyes* No!

    She close the door.... David blocked the door from closing and goes into her room.

    David- Look! Why are you acting like this?!!
    Sara- Like what?!
    David- Your all mad! I- I- Its not you!
    Sara- Oh so Im acting different?? I heard you talking with my brother okay!
    David- Ohh...Well I didn't mean it
    Sara- Whatever! Just leave!
    David- No! I won't leave until you're not mad at me anymore! Look Sara i didn't mean what i said... the whole thing i said was the opposite of what i think of u!!
    Sara- Then why did u say it??!
    David- I don't know why...
    Sara- Is it because Im a seventh grader?
    David- No... Yeah .... Look okay to tell you the truth i relly like u. And i mean it!
    Sara- Well to tell YOU the truth so do I.

    They both smiled. David looks at Sara and she looks at him. They lean close to eachother and just started kissing. He laid her onto her bed and there they go kissing again....

    is this it???

  • Jon Hunt
    18 years ago

    This is such a sweet story, i sure wish things were that simple.

    Kinda smacks of the kinda thing that goes around as myspace Bulletin chains..they always touch me...damn emotionalness