My Poems?

Can someone please comment on my poems as well as rate them? I get tired of not getting hardly any comments. I appreciate the votes and the few comments I get now but I would like more if it's not too much to ask. I am just after some good words or some critisim to help my writing craft grow. So if you would, if you voyte please comment also! Thanks for your time!

no prob!

Thanx for your comment on my poem lp!

Also, if you people would be kind enough to read, comment, and also vote on my work I would be happy to return the favor!

I wrote a new poem called "Untitled" If yall could please read it I would appreciate it and surely return the favor for you as well.

hey, read my newest work, and ill be sure to return the favor! thanks alot!

sure I will read them now.