Super Poem is finished as promised.........

  • Michael D Nalley
    18 years ago

    I love it .It is to me a symbol of poetic unity. which could exalt humanity by facing the truth.

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    Turned out good...well put together.

  • Forgotten Memory
    18 years ago

    very nice. i like how it turned out.
    heres a little thing on my thoughts of the finished product.

    Our society in its greatness
    brings about our own desturction;
    while humanity watches
    on the sidelines or in the chaos itself.

    Children held highest
    on the pedestal of life.
    Can we let our past be destroyed
    and with it, the future of our loved ones?