plzz, need you to tell me if you like this poem

I like it. The message is lovely and the rhyme is clear if not a little forced(but I can't really speak here)
Well Done for a good piece

Sondos

well, it doesn't really say anything that hasn't been said before in any new or interesting way, but it's a nice little pop ditty. I like it.

this is a good poem because your expressing your feelings. it does'nt matter whats on the out side, it's whats on the inside that counts.