vampire poems

need i say more..............yes i do

Rules
1) *the obvious* it must be your own work
2) must be about vampires
3) you must have the title above the poem
4) no never mind that is it

******Winners Will Be Decided On March 25th******
1st place 10 c/r
2nd place 8c/r
3rd place 6 c/r
4th place 4 c/r
5th place 2 c/r
and anyone that enters will get a comment on the poem that is posted SO I MUST HAVE THE TITLE OF THE POEM

A Kiss of Death

Youre like a vampire of the night
Stealing my life, right out of sight
Yet you didn't take my blood,
You took something even worse
You took my heart and soul
For eternity I bear this curse

What youve done to me
Cannot be reversed or changed
I live with this throughout each day
My colorful world transformed to gray

Youve viefected my life, the way I live
I dont smile or laugh anymore
This, because of your stupid need
To have a part of me, my inner core.

I feel lifeless and lost
I have nothing left to give
All because of you
Which I will never forgive

So now I am like you
A vampire in the night
Stealing innocent souls
I know its not right

But I have nothing left
But to live like you do
Now its my turn to take
So they feel the pain too
Just like you did to me
Ive becovie just like you
A vampire, of the night.

Sorry theres 2 words need to be changed in this.
"youve Viefected my life..."
it should be "youve effected my life..."

"ive becovie just like you"
should be" ive become just like you"

THANKS!

can i enter more then one?

Ruby

A Vampires Tragedy

I sit here alone atop a hill
I contemplate my sure place in heck
I think of the ecstatic thrill
When I sank my fangs into a man's neck

I think of the day I was reborn
Into darkness and into death
I recall watching my last dawn
I remember the pain as i gave my last breath

This was before my wedding day
I recall how with joy my bride did cry
But my thirst would not keep at bay
As we lay in our bed i drank her dry

I go through all the victims i drained
To diminish my terrible thirst
I remember the pleas, how they Struggled in vain
Each death taxed me more then the first

I think over my life, and the like
As i wait for the first light of day
Hoping some understanding will strike
Before the wind blows my ashes away.

The Vampires Victim

She walks through the night
Stalking him
He looks behind and sees her
She smiles, and he falters
She draws closer
Her eyes burn in her skull
Piercing him through

Her arm snakes out
And loops around him
Her lips caress his face,
His neck
She bares her teeth
Two incisors slide out
She administers a vampire's kiss

The man sighs
Not yet aware of his fate
She draws in the first mouthful
Of his hot life force
It rushes through her
Like liquid fire
Like molten love

She draws back a moment
A scarlet drop slides over her lips
The man sees
And horror fills his eyes
The stories his mother told him
Of monsters and ghouls
Come flooding back

She feels him stiffen
And tightens her grip
With one hand
She presses him to her
And the other muffles his screams
Checking they are alone still
She returns to her meal

As his life blood runs out
The man pales
He no longer resites
But lolls back in her embrace
She draws mouthful after mouthful
Feeling the fire it lights in her veins
Feeling the joy, the ecstasy

She feels his heartbeat
As it quickens
Fluttering in his chest
She draws deep a final time
And lets him slide out of her arms
He lies there, white as a sheet
Not dead yet
But no longer fully alive

She drops down beside him
And kisses him softly
Her brother
Her lover
Her victim
Before rising once more
And disappearing into the night.

Count Victim Number

My first time I dont forget,
A night to quench my thirst,
Corpse drapped over me,
Solemnly now cursed,

Tainted was my second,
Praying at me feet,
Yet I sunk my razor fangs,
Completely incomplete,

Drapped in my consicence,
Guilt now seeping in,
Third time was an infant,
Worse then just a sin,

Cutting through the night,
I glazed a forest high,
Fourth I live forever now,
Was my mother; the ever sly,

Screams seering through my ears,
It's the only thng I know,
One kiss passed through satanic,
For it was long ago,

Hair of angelic wonder,
His cheeks; a rosey glow,
For it was him betrayed a lover,
But his veins now cease to flow.

by,
The vampire enthusiast.

Vampires
By "-"cindy"-"

Vampires are immortal
They're creatures of the night
While humans being mortal
Have heard of them with fright

Vampires are devil
They're demons of nature
While humans aren't on that level
They're denature

Vampires are bloodsuckers
They have their cruel fangs
While humans stared with no blinker
But their expression was slang

Vampires are creatures
They're very powerful
While we feared to look at their features
Humans said they're pitiful

Vampires' maybe evil
But they're really cool
But sometimes very scary
But they're no fools

I'm Now Immortal
by Alyson

White faces surround me
Forever frozen in their eerie light
Darkness is around me
This is the path they walk in the night

Their thirst for blood controls them
They know not what they do
It drives them to do horrible things
And not always follow whats true

As they come upon me
I do not shed a tear
For they can't see through me
I won't show them my fear

They hold me in their tight embrace
Then give my the kiss of death
They whisper secrets in my ear
As I'm getting ready to take my last breath

But what they do next surprises me
They give me the gift of life
I am now immortal
No longer dealing with my strife

The next night I walk with them
Travel this ending land
For now I am one of them
Sitting at their right hand

The Vampire's Kiss
by Alyson

Silently walking
Trying not to be heard
No ones in sight
No ones uttering a word

Suddenly theres a pressence
Stalking me from behind
Coming ever closer
Thinking that I'm still blind

They come up behind me
Hold me so I can't move
Death is in the air
Now I realize what I will lose

The sharp teeth peirce the flesh
Creating a fountion of blood
That flows into their mouth
Like a welcome flood

My body stiffens
I can't breath
I start to fall
While they turn and leave

I cry out for help
But they walk away
Because of my blood
They will live another day

I started to think
Of everything that I would miss
Because I would never see them
I had been given the Vampire's Kiss

yes Ruby but only 2 Max

Hunger Pains *
by PreciousIllusions

You know that feeling you get
Deep down in your gut
Sharp needles stabbing in your stomach
Nothing seems to come up
Stick my hands down your throat
Arteries won't allow flow
These hunger pains are killing me
So to relieve my pain, I sink in my teeth
Drink deep from your veins
As reprieve for my hunger, the price is your pain
Guilt trips of feeding rack my brain
This hunger causes so much pain
I don't even think I need to drink
May be I'm just weak in the knees
I don't get off on your pain
I merely add your loss as my gain
May be it is a defect in my brain
All I know is I'm too sane to be insane
((Too calculating))
There is no lust for the kill
No sexual drive for the thrills and frills
Your fear only strengthens my will
Every emotion you show is another I know
Enhancing my skill, 'til you become still
We are not magical, we are not mystical
It is not fantastic, not a bit romantic
Not a gimmick like Manson's music
This is not Anne Rice, this is not a game
We are not dead and we go out in the day
Making you so self-concious
Going to make you feel so stupid
The way you judge my daily habits
Does it make you nervous, how I stare
You'll never know how much I don't care

*this is sooo old

heeeelllllllooooooooooo

hmmmm

where oh where has the judge gone?

Ruby

sorry don't have that many poems so i have decided to extend the contest to

APRIL 15 OR WHEN I GET 20 POEMS
which ever comes first

All of my poems and regarding Vampires and bloodsucker.... so feel free to read them...

ps. I only wirte poems regarding vampires and bloodsuckers

Thirsty

I pelt through the forest
Not looking back
Dodging past trees going oh, so fast
He's on my trail, hot on my track

I will not slow down
To meet my death
I will keep on running till dawn
Or dusk until I collapse
From fatigue

I passed by trees
That danced in that slight Autumn breeze
Not time I to watch
For he was Catching up

I picked up speed not seeing the root
And landed face first in a pile of soot
I didn't have to turn to see his face
Lurking over me
I knew who I'd see
His features I'd come to know
These past few weeks

That intricate pale face
Those piercing black eyes
His maroon lips
Soft and beautiful, perfect in every way

I turned to stare up
Into the empty eyes of my stalker
He hid so many secrets behind those lids
I wished that I'd lived to uncover them
But he had come at last
And he was thirsty

if i'm allowed to post another one, please pm me
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Immortal Quest

Feel the sweet blood dripping
Tonight it's me vs. your neck
Into your flesh I'm ripping
You're a shaking nervous wreck

Emerging from the grave
The one kept in your mind
Now, you've gotta be brave
Let my shiny fangs unwind

I pierce into your skin once more
Immortality has sealed it's door

Blood's sweet toxicity

by Sociopathetic xLolax

Running through the forest at midnight,
Atmosphere black as pitch
No moon or stars are out tonight,
Ready for the fight for your life?

Now the prey in the hunt, he should have known
That such a soul should have be left alone.
Smell sickly sweet that odor? Lying on your breath?
Thats the tragic scent, of forbidden love's death.

Verboten love's tantalizing kiss.
Has left you in a troublesome abyss.
Protection now, is what you miss.
All from a simple, yet deadly kiss.

Vampyric blood flows through your soul
Do not fight it, 'tis what makes you whole
One which thrives, in the darkest of night,
Should not try, to be a fool of the light.

How asinine, Darling you have been.
Foolish, desperate Vampyric child.
Pretending to be a normal human within,
When in fact you are immortal, sinful, and wild.

Now you've let go of your insecurities,
and realized humans are simply impurities
So from the thrill of the chase feel true felicity
and taste the kiss of blood's sweet toxicity

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i don't know why this thing hasn't been deleted but seriously people look at dates....this was posted in 2006!!!
i'm sorry for the confusion but i don't know why this thing is resurfacing two years later.

Confusing.

Okay. Well never mind then! No entry for me! =P