why depression?

ive finally figured out for myself why i get depressed only sometimes..... and i put in a poem... and i was hoping that i could get you guys opinions.... the poem's called For Him.... if you could read it, rate it, and comment... id apreciate it a lot.... this poem is one of the most meaningful poems to me and since i value you guys's opinions so much... i wanna hear them,.... plz
loves and hugs
Manda Lynn

I'll read comment and rate.