lost love

Hey-

This is about "lost love" so anything in that topic is great..

RULES:

1) must be your own work
1) no cussing or explict poems
1) HAVE FUN!!

PRIZES:

1st place:
comments and votes on all your poems

2nd place:
6 votes and comments

3rd place:
3 votes and comments

I tried to forget you
and i tried to move on
but each time i see you
i dream, whereupon
my heart beats much faster
I'm trying to impress
i want you to love me
though its her you posses

we share many good times
and are still best of friends
every moment with you
ill treasure till the end
Ive found being "just friends"
is harder than it sounds
an hour with you
and I'm in love again!

by Alice

hey - i forgot to say that it ends on march 22nd so get em in

i hope this is ok because its about a love dying so if its not tell me

This is not goodbye
by Tabby

Crying by his bedside my tears flow endlessly
I held his hand so tightly never wanting to let go
Trying to not think about what is about to be
I look up at him trying to not let my sadness show

His eyes are closed his breathing is slow and heavy
I run my hands through his thick, dark, brown hair
His handsome face is so pale with the color gray
That I begin to cry even harder thinking it isn't fair

Sickness is taking my true love away from me
Draining away his energy happiness and light
But not stealing our love away from each other
That is the one thing that he was able to fight

His eyes slowly open and he turns toward me
He smiles a weak smile and touches my cheek
I feel myself breakdown and burst into sobs
trying to say don't die but I could no longer speak

he grabs my hand and pulls me to him
reaching for my face he brings me into a kiss
then he hugs me with such a weak embrace
I hug him so tight never wanting to end this

Suddenly he lets go I pull myself slowly up
He looks at me with such sadness in his eyes
"I love you sweetheart"he says to me
"I love you but there will be no goodbyes"

"I love you to" I sob into his shoulder
I lay on his chest hearing his heart as I cry
I feel his breathing slowly fade away
As i sob to myself I say "its ok this is not goodbye".....

Love may be just a 4-letter word,
Before love comes in, your free as a bird.
But this word can lead to eternal sadness,
As your heart begins to beat less and less.

What ever happened to "We Belong Together?"
You said we'd be together, but nothing lasts forever.
"You wanna be my lady, I'm thinking more like my wife"
Is what you sang to me, but you ended my love life.

Now I call you, and I get your machine,
Knowing your sitting there, hearing it ring,
"Hi, this is Jesse, leave a message after the beep"
Is what I always get, yet in my heart a place you keep.

Saying goodbye to a guy like you,
Is something that I never wanted to do.
I thought I'd never have to worry, about my 2nd kiss,
Because on the 1st I nearly missed.

Yet you didn't care, because you said you loved me,
And you wouldn't rush me about anything, you took it easy,
Because you knew that I'm not ready for too much,
So you said that enough was just getting a touch-

From my hand. One kiss and I never saw you again,
We continued to talk, every now and then.
Now we barely talk, today was the first time in months,
Yet I've dreamed about your face in the billions.

I dream of our single kiss we had,
Under the stars, but now it makes me so sad.
I keep listening to our song, as I cry,
I can't let go of you, but I don't know why.

You were my single love, and I'll love you always,
As minutes turn to hours, and hours to days.
No matter who I end up marrying and having children with,
You'll always be in my mind, this isn't a myth.

I still love you Jesse.

~*Who Cares*~

the untold lies....

l would never forgive myself..
even i am dropped in hell
never knowing how u feel.....
with a deep blue ill.........

on that short christmas eve.....
when you suddenly leave
a pair of teary eyes.......
as i know the untold lies.....

thus, your gentle smile.....
has turned into incomprehensible file.....
and every single of your touch
has become a deep ingrained cut....

what a fool i am......
full of critics and damn.....
your life is full of uncertainty
but i keep nagging a pity

again and again...
i expect you to understand..
with a sound of offense
without knowing where you stand.....

even so, you always deny.....
to say that important line
with a soft white lie...
or a saying i'm fine........

now, bombard me with your protests..
but please do not give me such a test..
please don't you ever leave me.....
cause you mean the world to me...

Till the End

by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

You are always there,
Through the times that i was scared.
You were there when i needed someone to hold,
You were the person who never told.
When i first met you i thought you were kind,
But now that we are parted, i am blind.
You asked me one night,
To be with you, things would turn out alright,
But as time passed away,
I had something to say.

My grandpa died, and i wanted to tell you,
But valentines day would never come through.
I never got anything that day,
But i knew what you were trying to say.
That night i cried and i was alone,
I didn't call you because i couldn't use the phone.
I was so sad and depressed, i had no where to go,
I lied in my bed and look out my window.
I saw the stars, they twinkled in with light,
And that reminded me of that happy night.
Nobody could make me happier, when i was with you,
Our relationship was wonderful and true,
But that day you broke my heart,
And told me you would rather start,
on another relationship, to just be friends,
and he would be there to the very end.

Three weeks went by,
and he never even said "hi".
I told myself things would never workout,
And now i realized there is no need to shout,
He talked to me at the end of last week,
And he said we need to be friends, and our friendship he did seek.
Ever since then, we have been the best of friends,
And we both realize now, will we be there for each other till the end.

Shot with an arrow
By David Marshall

Shot with an arrow,
across the evening seas.
Love you gave and borrow,
across the withering trees.

Waiting for your beauty,
across the roaring mountains.
Waiting for you to come to me,
love like sparkling fountains.

Here you come and go,
like birds in the winter.
Love you never show,
like the day goes dimmer.

For every sun that shined,
and that has arose.
My heart you rip and bind,
that made my soul froze.

I try to believe,
that you will soon come back.
I gave love but didn't receive,
and being loved is what i lack.

I guess I'll sit and wait to die,
like the nighttime stars.
Here I sit and begin to cry,
as I look at my scars.

Wishing you well...
by J. Lau

I got your mail.
I know my stance.
I need to distance,
To lessen your pain.
My presence reminds you
of memories you shared with him,
Which does not help you heal,
Your wounded heart and soul.

I feel your pain and sorrow,
More then you will ever know.
I worry about you,
But there's nothing more I can do.
How I wish I can go back in time,
And change everything til it's fine.

Somehow I wish that you will know,
That it was no less painful for me then you.
Fate maybe to blame,
In this ruthless game;
But casualties were not bound to two,
For I was there, right beside you.

I wish you happiness,
Should you be gone.
Far away from this lonely place,
Across the ocean where I will gaze.
How I wish that you will stay,
But wishing you well is all I pray.
When you come back healed and well,
Please don't forget this lonely heart,
Who wished you well
From the bottom of his heart.

< - - - - - - - - - - - >

Not Mine

I was your voice when
you couldn't speak.

Not my words.

I was your strength
when you stood to bleed.

Not my hurt.

You needed support
and you know I was there.

Not my fight.

Your hand was guilty
of an unforgivable crime.

Not my touch.

You were
struggling to breathe.

I held you.

Not my breath.

You were dying from
your own shame.

I watched.

Not my death.

You were missing
your moments alive.

I heard.

Not my life.

Begging for sunshine
in this prison cell.

Your world not mine.

I'm everything you needed
but nothing that I wanted.

Reality had hit us hard.

Reality had hit us hard that time,
When you told me you'd be gone
Life would never be the same
Too bad it had taken me so long

You see I didn't want to say goodbye
I thought if I didn't you wouldn't leave
Like all friendships we think they'll last
But like everyone else I was naive.

We wanted to remain friends
We would write and call too
But we also said friends forever
But of course it wasn't true

I miss your laugh
And our special talks
The days we spent together
Our late night walks.

You were always there for me
You were like my twin
Whether it was good or bad
We stuck together through think and thin

And when my life was in danger
But I didn't have a clue
You were there to pick up the pieces
You always came through.

I'll never forget the night, it was so nice
You finally told me what was going on
It was the first time I could see into your soul
It was the night we had talked until dawn

I remember crying on your shoulder.
You told me it would be alright.
You told me you''d be moving
That's why I'll always remember that night

Remeber when we used drive so fast
Down the old highway
I know I always will...
I think about it everyday

So when your driving down the highway
If you look around your car
You'll see a C.d with the songs
We used to sing to with my guitar

Listen to our favourite C.D
And when you hear our song
What I want you to know...
Is that I've loved you all along...

--emotionless.19*

No One Rides For Free
by PreciousIllusions

I’m not chasing after you again. But I hope you remember, there was a time when I did. & I hope you choke on your regret. I swallowed mine. Took a shower, I’m fine. Kind of bitter still. Another glass, a few more pills. Hit the floor. Won’t think about you anymore. My dreams are all I’m living for. & I thought you shared them too. But you’re just passing through. & I feel used & discarded. I let you lead me on. I loved you when you lead me on.

Even the Dead
by â—Š Atomic â—Š

"I will wait for you forever",
Her promise rang loud and clear.
And true to her words she kept,
Until the day her death drew near.

He never came back for her,
His words were an empty promise.
But still she waited for his arrival,
Cherishing memories of his kiss.

She never knew he got married,
Had a few children of his own.
When they were moving on together,
She was waiting for him alone.

Now her ghastly figure stood,
Draped in the purest of white lace.
In the midst of all the gravestones,
Still in searching of his face.

He heard of her death years later,
But the news didn't bother him one bit.
He just brought his children along,
For an over due visit.

When she saw him with his family,
Her heart stopped at a final end.
Who would have ever guessed,
Even the dead can die again.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!©

Treasure

Tears stream down my cheek
I watch you fly away
To a kingdom unknown
A paradise of better days

A place of love is your stay
Emotions haunt nevermore
Sin is not a fear here
Surroundings so pure

Lies are no longer an issue
The truth is what you find
No more rage and hatred
Peace too complicated for the human mind

So comforting for me now
The memories we shared
Close to my heart they stay
Forget them I wouldn't dare

To the end of my days
I'll mourn you forever
You were my only love
My only true treasure

IT'S NOT THE BEST...

Its not the beginning,
When love comes into your life.
Its not the best,
Who comes into your life.

Its not always very beautiful,
The moments you spend with him.
Its not always very checherish-able,
The feelings you shared with him.

Its not the pain you deserved,
You got for making him a part of your life.
Its not the love you deserved,
Which 'can't part of your life.

Its not the end,
When your heart is broken.
Its not the worst,
When you are apart by someone.

wen will u announce d results??????

Sorry it took me so long.. but i had a really hard time choosing so this is what i came up with... and they were all really good.. For everyone that entered ill comment and vote on one of yours..

Since i had such a hard time choosing there is more than one for each place..

1st.. Emotionless.. Britt..Invisible 2 you

2nd: Tabby... David..

3rd: Atomic..

Ill make sure to get the prizes done today or tomorrow..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

wow thanks a lot, and thanks for all the comments :D
congratulations to everyone else as well :d
xx ALLY xx

cool joint first place =) lol I've got to say you sure comment fast! =) thanks for the comments! =D

THANKS ALOT!