Can you.....

I wrote a poem called "An impious night" I felt no one understood what it really meant. So i wrote another poem and added to it. Can you please check it and comment? I really want to know how you feel about it. Thanks for those who read it. Can you read the extra poem i added to it? I will surly return the favour.

The poem is called "An impious night"

Thanks for the quick response, Ann. :)