Help!

I started this poem but I CANNOT think of how to end it, I need more can anyone suggest anything please?

I sit upon the lonesome stream,
Of curiosity and an undreamt dream.
I hear the sounds of an ocean strong,
The fantasy within the stream so long.
It desires of what it cannot be,
It tries to subsist what it cannot see.

It's not that good, but It came to me so i started to write it.

Keep going....I like it....but if you feel its finished then dont intentionally try and extend it. Poetry is like breathing...write what first comes to mind... tell me more about why ur lonesome?....what cant be?....pick up a pen and whatever comes to you...write it....

hope that helps...come help me out with some of my stuff...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

to me it sounds finished, even though to you it may not. i love it...full of detail and feeling yet its short and simple. one of my favorites! i think you should leave it how it is but if you feel you should finnish it- you re the poet! excellent write though!

i am feeling something about the moon here, try it...maybe umm

I look at the moon
and soon I see it's
tears. It hides it fears
beyond the clouds,
where even the stars
cannot reach it.

idk lol that was totally random i like it so i might use it let me know if u do so yeah..keep it up, its a vry good poem.

Lissa

I feel it is very good actually. Sometimes a feeling such as this could come along so quick and be gone. When that happens let it sit. It will finish itself in a little bit.